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Warning incoming writefag
Okay, so, I cranked out this short little fanfic the other day but it didn't come out exactly how I wanted. I've spent the past two days trying to revise it but I think I'm getting to the point where I need outside help, so any criticism would be appreciated. Be as harsh as possible.
Basically, this is just a short fic focusing on Spike the night after Dragonshy. I wanted it to be pretty concise, workable in the story without violating continuity, and not drag on at the risk of increasing the wangst factor. Here's the link: