This is where i'd post an image of Fluttershy clopping
IF I HAD ONE

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I'm back.

Actually trying to write, but teaching yourself IT, programming, and network admin stuff is challenging to say the least...

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Lurking and what not,

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>>8453395
pic related

>>8453477
Dubs

>>8453509
>>8453477
Actually there's a very well done gif of her just fondling herself that i must've stared at for an eerie amount of time


Because it was so well animated....

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>>8453456
Nice cat...

>>8453560
Tempting anon tempting,

>>8453397
Welcome back!

I hope everyone is ready for another sing-along.
Although this one has a half-assed ending.

>Day of training in Equestria.
>Wake up.
>Shit, shower, and shave.
>Don your ceremonial Flutter-repelling karate gi.
>Okay, well, it didn't actually repel Fluttershy...
>But you always felt powerful wearing it...
>Eat your breakfast after chopping the table in half.
>In reality, you just unlatched the hook underneath and let that half fall after you pressed your hand to it.
>Still felt alpha as fuck.
>Mid-cereal comes the faithful knock at the door.
>Center yourself by grunting and pressing your palms together in front of your face.
>Close your eyes and take deep breaths.
>Pull a black headband out of your pocket and tie it.
>It matches your totally legit 50th degree black belt.
>Open your eyes.
>It's time.
>Flying ninja kick your way to the door and throw it open.
WOOOOOAAAHHHHH!
>You swing your arms around like you're about to perform some ninja jutsu.
>You pull your right foot up your left leg and stop when it's bent 90 degrees.
>You wobble for a moment and have to hop up and down a few times to keep from falling over.
You will never defeat me, Flutter-san!
>Your lips move in a badly dubbed version of what you're saying.
>Fluttershy tuts.
>You notice for the first time that she's also wearing a karate uniform.
>"Anon, Anon... You're technique is all wrong."
>She floats over behind you while you stay frozen in position, ready to strike at a moment's notice.
>You hear music start to play faintly.
>http://youtu.be/ZSS5dEeMX64?t=16s
>Not this shit again...
>Fluttershy taps your right leg, making you lift it higher.
>She moves your outstretched arms lower so that your center of gravity is more manageable.
>She focuses your head forward.
>"Let's get down to business." She barks in your ear.
>"To reshape these buns." You flinch as she grabs your butt.
Why'd I get the rapist?
>You spin around quickly.
Instead of any other ones?

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>>8453596

>>8453677
>She's gone from your sight.
>"You're the cutest thing I've ever met."
>She's behind you again. "And you can bet, before I'm through."
>She ruffles your hair. "Mister I'll make a man, out of you..."
>Fluttershy rubs her face up against yours and rubs your crotch with a hoof.
But you're tranquil as a forest...
>You push her away.
>"I'm on fire, within!" She presents her dripping marehood to you.
>"Once you find my center..."
>You blow past her and start down a dirt path.
I'll be full of sin!
>She chases you to a river crossing. "Don't be spineless, pale, pathetic..."
WHAT?
>"Oh you haven't got a clue..." She backs you up against the riverbed.
>"Somehow I'll make a man out of you."
>Fluttershy hugs you tight and starts mashing her twat.
>"I'm never gonna catch my breath."
>You try futilely to push her off.
Say goodbye to those who knew me...
>Look to your weak muscles.
Boy was I a fool in school for cutting gym...
>This mare's got you scared to death.
>Hope she doesn't get the D.
>Look to the river.
>Boy you really wish that you knew how to swim...
>"Be a MAN!" Fluttershy backs her crotch up against yours.
>"Your coom must be swift as a coursing river." She cranes her head to look up to you.
>"With all the force of a great typhoon!"
>You gag.
>"With all the strength of a raging fire."
>You jump into the river.
>"As powerful as the mare inside the mooon!"
>You struggle to stay abreast of the water.
>Fluttershy flies above you, not really panicking the way she should be.

>>8453723
>"Time is racing toward us." She rubs her belly.
>"Until our son arrives..."
>She reaches out a hoof to you.
>"Heed my every order."
>You reach out for it but she pulls away.
>"And you might survive..."
>You chance yelling at her.
You're unsuited for...
>You go under and come back up.
My semen store!
>Catch a breath.
So pack up!
Go home!
You're through!
>She sobs.
Why would I make a mare out of you!?
>You go under again, taking in large gulps of water.
>You try to keep your eyes focused on the light of the sun, but your vision start going dark.
>"Be a man!"
>Fluttershy's garbled voice.
>"You must be swift as a coursing river!"
>You can hear her crying.
>"With all the force of a great typhoon!"
>Something splashes into the river.
>With all the strength of a raging fire...
>An orange blur tugs on your gi collar.
>Mysterious as the dark side of the moon.
>Your eyes close.

>"Be ah man!"
>Something pushes on your chest.
>You shouldn't have swam in that coursing river.
>You cough and sputter up water.
>With all the force of a great typhoon.
>Applejack hugs you.
>With all the strength of a raging fire.
>You see her glare daggers at Fluttershy.
>As powerful as the mare inside the moon...

>Fluttershy takes off, leaving you and AJ.
>"Ahm so glad you're alright, Sugarcube."
You... saved me...
>You give AJ a big hug and stroke her wet mane.
>You feel her muzzle get a little warmer against your face.
>"Aw, t'weren't nuthin'. Ah'd do anything for a... han'sum feller like yerself..."
>You break the hug and look into AJ's eyes.
>Her blush deepens.
AJ...
>She nods.
Don't tell Fluttershy, but...
>You motion her closer and she complies.
>You whipser:
Apples are my fetish.
>You spend the rest of the day
>Fucking Applejack.

>>8453758
Fuckin finally, my fave pone gets the D.

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>>8453697
>Dat file name.
Oh man you got me.
I'll go back to my cave now.
I just have to have that one bit of fun.

>>8453758
Not bad not bad, was hoping for the continuation of Dizty tho, but this covers it. The rhyming was a really good touch, makes the mood of the story.

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>>8453874
Favorite pone you say?

Shit that the circlejerk co-writes, yo

>Day fooly-cooly in Equestria
>Not the anime
>It was wierd
>No, today is the day you finally get to meet that Princess Celestia twi's been going on about with such reverance
>And you've been asked, strictly, to avoid the foolish behavior you've been known to exhibit
>In other words, you've been forced to leave behind your beloved rubber chicken.
>Ah that rubber chicken
>Your sole companion from the world of man
>You'd taken to calling him ... Dave
>He was your favorite instrument of mayhem, and it helped keep the forces of Flutterrape at bay.
>With his flippy-floppy powers of distraction and defense, no-pony had been able to get their hooves on your goods
>Pinkie was always mesmerized by its rubbery floppiness
>You caught her and Dave together after a couple of bottles of wine
>It was surprisingly sexy
>You are considering letting her take him on a date after you all get back
>And pulling a Fluttershy( Stalking)
>For science of course
>Strictly for science
>Back to the plot
>You've spent the last few days packing your stuff, and now that you're finally ready for the trip, you have some time to kill
>You kill time the same way you kill all your problems
>With copious amounts of liquor
>This has it's benefits and drawbacks
>However, the time gets away from you, and halfway through your second bottle of tequila (with some hot sauce because you're not a pussy) there is a knock at your door
>LET YOUR DRUNKEN WRATH BE UNLEASHED UPON THE TRESPASSER!
>You run to the door
>And instead of opening it like a pussy you pull your head back and slam into it
“Fuck your shit, door!”
>Because you're just that cool, the door splits in half straight down the middle, and standing there in shock is...
>Apple Bloom
>She will not be spared

1/?

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>>8453874
Mah neiggah
>pic related

>>8453915
Never thought about a Return to Sender Part 2...
You have sown a dangerous seed, sir.

>>8453973

>"Uh... Anon... What's goin-"
>You take hold of the amazing yellow mini-mini-horse, and with all of your considerable might, throw her into the great blue oblivion
>You watch as she sails into the distance...
>That's definitely a three-pointer
>"Hey mang, mayhaps you should've asked what she wanted?"
>Shut up, Dave
>You're a rubber chicken, you're not suppose to talk
>Now that you're out of your comfy armchair, you might as well start your drunken rampage.
>"Yeah well, I do what I want Beyatch!"
>You flail your arms as you stagger towards town
>It makes you feel like Godzilla
>You've brought some Pretzels so that you can further this self-illusion by imagining you're eating tree trunks
>Ponies flee in terror from your majestic countenance
>And because you're drunk
>They are smart to do so
>You bellow a tremendous roar to assert your dominance
>The few who freeze in fear are not spared their fate
>Some pony has the audacity to roar back!
>You look around for the foolish equine who has just thrown away their life...
>...It's Fluttershy
>You pick up the foolish flutter flyer, and aim for the nearest blackhole
>"Y-you could wreck my Tokyo any day, Anon..."
>and then some jackass ruined it
>Suddenly, there is a bright light behind you...
>You turn around ready to face the newest challenger, only to see something glorious!
>"Anonymous? You are late for our appointment!"
>Princess Celestia in her divine splendour glares at you
>You are manhandling one of the heroes of destiny.
>You are drunk
>And you are late
"...Tequila was involved.”
>"Anon... You know the punishment for angering me..."

2/?

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>>8453758
i'm probably never gonna be able to do something as pro ass this

>>8453955
Yeah, yeah, I know what you're gonna say:
"lel your fave p0ny is useless and isn't even best back-ground pone"
Well how about I like her personality, that should count for something.

>>8454018

"N-no! I didn't mean it! Please!"
>"Ten hours in the >rape dungeon!"
>Princess Celestia's horn glows with a pearlescent light
>Her magic washes over you
>You find yourself in a room
>wat do?
>A. Kill yourself faget
>B. Masturbate furiously
>Princess Celestia walks into the dungeon.
>"I've decided that you're in need of something more drastic. Prepare yourself!"
>Princess Celestia's horn shines once more.
>you try to prepare yourself
>You feel your body contort in ways that it was never meant to
>Agonizing pain shoots through every fiber of your being.
>Then as suddenly as it began, it leaves
>It's oddly ERAHTIK
"W-what have you done to me...?"
>You look at your body.
>Horrible white wings sprout from your back.
>A horn projects itself from your forehead.
"N-no! I'm an alicorn! NO! MY CHARACTER IS RUINED! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
>Your wings are so pretty.
>BAD END

People who I remember contribooted: C.G. (Started dat shyet), Clever Dick, Myself (2 posts of like... 2 words, lol fail) and theonetheycallmonk

Anyone I forgot, please rape my face because I'm clearly a tremendous faggot if I forgot you.

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>>8454040
practice makes perfect buddy

and you've got the right stuff.

>>8454123
>Crossed

Easily the most shitty of comic series.

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>>8453758
I love your singalongs, Eti.
It's nice to see you writing again.
Gotta give AppleKick the Dick some time.

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>>8454123
Please

>>8453874
Read my "a year and two weeks" story mang, she's my personal fav as well.
Alright, story is GO!
http://pastebin.com/tN9q6HBt
[spoiler

>>8454202
>As you make your way through town, various ponies greet you, sometimes starting small conversations, sometimes giving you free samples, generally making you feel welcome. The feeling is nice, and you graciously accept the company as well as the materials.
>By the time you reach the treebrary, you have been fairly loaded down with fruits, vegetables, addresses, a couple soaps, etc, etc.
>You kick the door, hoping someone will be there right now to open up and let you inside.
>Thankfully someone is.
>You head inside, and mumble out a thanks, to whoever it was that opened the door for you.
>You make your way to your room, and deposit your gift pile onto the bed.
>As you begin cataloguing what today has brought you, you hear the door shut, and a lock slide into place.
>You turn around to see what's up, and find yourself staring into two greenish-blue eyes.
>In an instant, your joy at coming home and receiving gifts is reduced to nothing, as you are assailed by an unnatural and paralyzing fear.
>You are frozen in place as she slowly steps forward, her eyes swallowing you whole.

>>8454219
>She pushes you onto the bed, which breaks eye contact for a second.
>You quickly ball up and shut your eyes, whatever she's planning on doing cannot be good. She stamps a hoof, but does not leave, instead she walks behind you, the room soon smells of hay, and oat.
>You refuse to look at whatever it is she's trying to do.
>Eventually, she grows tired of whatever it is she's doing, and gets up. She unlocks the door, opens it, and you hear the door shut.
>You don't trust it yet though, so you swing your arms wildly, and manage to connect with something definitely pretending to have left the room.
>She yelps as your open hand connects with her jaw, and leaves whimpering. You hazard a peek around you and find that almost everything in the room is wet with some semi-thick substance. The substance is the source of the smell, and you can't stand to be in there any longer.
>You walk out of the room, make sure the yellow freak has left, and make your way out of the house.
>She likely wouldn't try anything in public.

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Any good stories with rainbow dash?

>>8454247
>As you walk around town, keeping in view of at least three p0nies at a time, you feel your head begin to throb. The pain is different this time however, This time it is not debilitating to your faculties.
>If anything, you would describe this pain as sharpening your awareness.
>You see the colors of the world, hear the sounds and smell the scents of the world. You get the feeling you need to walk to the Everfree forest. It is as though someone is calling to you.
>Someone familiar.
>You abandon your original task of merely walking around, and make your way to the forest''s edge. For a moment, you come to your senses as you recall your friends' warnings about the dangerous creatures that dwell within.
>This moment of clarity is quashed entirely however, as a new wave of pain crests over your consciousness.
>You clutch your hands to your temples, attempting to prevent your brain from leaking out your ears.

>>8454275
>Thankfully the pain passes, but before you realize what's happened, you find you've somehow made your way into the woods, and are now hurrying along what could never be considered a path to somewhere you hope you'll find answers.
>After what feels like an hour or so of making your way through the dense foliage, you break into a clearing of the canopy. The sudden light blinds you, and you throw up your arms to protect yourself from the harsh rays.
>When you finally feel comfortable enough, you let down your arms, and see at the opposite side of the clearing, a lone standing figure.
>He looks… familiar
>Nay, he looks exactly like you!

>>8454040
So you wanna be a sad cunt, bro?
FUCK that shit, bro!
You're a sick cunt if you wanna be!
Practice makes perfect, bud. That's why we're here. Post, practice, take criticism, and use it to forge and refine your next tale.

If you feel you ain't there yet, you will be. Soon.

>>8454291
>You are now Anonymous again and what?
>Pinkie told you after a bit of drinking that there was a mirror pool somewhere in the forest, and that when you stepped into it two of you came out.
>Is there maybe a mirror pool deal going on here?
>He's just standing there, staring at you.
>He looks terrible though, almost as though he's had to survive in here for quite some time.
>His suit is torn and dirty. He's got scrapes bruises and scars all over his exposed skin. He simultaneously a mad and a cold look in his eyes.
>It sends shivers down your spine to see the way he's peering at you.
>You are contemplating saying something to the other you, but before you get a chance, he says something unintelligible.
>It sounds like something between a hiss, a hacking cough, and a laugh.

>>8454254
Well sheit.

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>>8454250

Working on one actually

Rainbro is best bro

>>8454304
>You get a very bad feeling, and begin looking about the ground for a stick or a rock, anything really to possibly keep him away from you.
>The pain from earlier has also returned, settling in the center of your skull, and steadily increasing in intensity.
>He continues making the odd terrible noise, never moving from his spot, simply watching you with his mad unblinking eyes.
>The heat of the forest becomes glaringly apparent as the pain in your skull continues to climb. the buzzing of mosquitoes, the stench of the wilderness, it is all bearing down upon your senses as you huddle into a ball trying to clear your thoughts.
>Soon, it becomes too much, and you let out a scream, before diving into the foliage in a pathetic attempt to escape the pain, and the whispers in your ears.
>The whispers take on a haunting and melodic tone, drowning out the sounds and feelings of the forest.

>>8454250

Not from me, not yet... (Like you could call my stories good anyway)

>>8454329
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mCRa7S8O-tU
>i have long been waiting to see you my friend.
>You open your eyes to see that you are no longer in any forest. To be honest, you cannot tell where you are.
>there is a vast emptiness all around you, but you don't feel fear of any kind. There is instead, a great knowing feeling that settles upon your mind. As you continue looking about yourself, you look down and see you are standing on the surface of a great mirror.
>The other you is looking at you with the same mad eyes the feral anon in the forest did.
>That's you?!
>no.
>we are not the same.
>you've seen what's left of me out there, in the "real" world.
What's happening?

>>8454364
>The other you makes a sneering face, looking down on you from below.
>what? did the child forget the bad memories? did he want mamma to make it all go away?
>coward!
>A chorus of whispers repeat the accusation, beating you down into a quivering pile.
>i will not be denied any longer.
>we have a home, and we are past due for returning.
We? A home? Isn't this my home?
>The feral anon seems to sadden immensely upon hearing you say this, the fire in his eyes replaced with the ice-y coldness from before.
>yes, my poor forgetful friend, we. we had a home, a wife, daughters, a life! and in the flash of a lightbulb. gone, like tears in rain.
>To see the previously so aggressive anon speak with such sorrow throws your suspicion into doubt. If what he's saying is true, then where do you fit into this?
>There has been a dullness about your senses since waking up here in this mirror world, but suddenly, you feel the dullness cast aside as though only so much heavy fabric.


Perspective shift inbound

>>8454401
>You are now Twilight Sparkle
>The ride over to Canterlot was quiet, and uncomfortable. Normally you'd have gotten on one of the first class carts, courtesy of the Princess. But you knew how observant your teacher was, she'd know you were coming if you'd taken one of those. So instead you opted to get pinkie to help you with a disguise.
>That pony may not have been a unicorn, but in matters such as these, she had a magic of her own.
>Then you got a ticket for the coach carts.
>Just to be safe.
>Although to be honest, you didn't feel safe. You felt terrified, here you were attempting to acquire help from the Princess' sister, without alerting her. Under the wrong context, this could look very bad.
>Upon arriving, you looked in on a couple "friends", made small talk, and learned what you could about luna's habits. For as close as the two of you were, you still don't know her very well.
>You're planning on meeting up with her on her evening stroll through the Canterlot gardens.
>She'll be with her guard, but once you ditch the disguise, things should go over fine.
>You have a few hours until Then though, and the fake gut you're wearing is pretty heavy.
>Perhaps you can find a park or an inn to sit down for a moment at.

>>8454419
>You've been sitting in a fairly seedy tavern for the past few hours, sticking with water, listening to the colorful conversations around you.
>It's almost time. You've been getting a very bad feeling in your gut for the past couple minutes.
>Not about the princess, Things have been going smoothly in that regard.
>No, this feels like something bad is happening to one of your friends. Like they're in pain, or like they're about to be.
>You almost drop the act and head home, but you can't. Not when you've gotten so close to some answers.
>You put the concern near the back of your awareness, and focus on the task at hand
>Night has fallen, Your teacher has likely retired for the evening, and soon Luna will be making her rounds of the garden.
>You abandon the disguise, and head into the castle. A few guards don't initially recognize you, but after a few words, you've got them leading you to Luna.
>They don't try and make any kind of small talk, which is perfectly fine for you. You still want to go over what you'll say. If you make a mistake now, who knows how this will go down.
>They stop just outside the garden, you thank them, and they depart, probably back to their original posts or something.
>You take a deep breath, to calm yourself, and then head in, spotting the princess of the night immediately.
>She appears to be in the middle of caring for the garden, so you wait for her to finish up before attempting to speak.
>She has however noticed you, and begins chatting with you before dismissing her guards.

>>8454441
>"Twilight, hello, it is a pleasure to see you this lovely evening. Truthfully we are most grateful for the company of a friend on this night."
"H-Hello Princess, How are you?"
>You're stuttering like Fluttershy, you must be more nervous than you thought.
>"Please Twilight, call us Luna, we are friends are we not?"
"Of course Luna, How are you? How is Princess Celestia?"
>"We are well, as is our sister. She has been retiring earlier and earlier recently however. When we asked her what was the matter, she merely attempted to dissuade our concern. It did not help in the least."
>Perhaps the Princess was sick?
"If she's sick, then i hope she gets better soon. Hey Luna, you know about the human Anonymous right?"
>"We have heard of him yes, but we have not gotten the chance to meet him ourselves, neither in this world nor in that of dreams."
>Luna can't enter his dreams?
"Perhaps it's because he's an unfamiliar species?"
>"We have come to this conclusion as well. Although it is strange, we have noticed that his dream is open to us, and yet sealed away by a powerful magic. Likely our sister herself is keeping his dreams isolated. Perhaps she does not trust him yet."
>This is getting you nowhere, you'll need to ask Celestia herself, but that doesn't mean you are done with Luna.
"Luna, would it bother you terribly if I asked you a favor?"
>"Of course not dearest Twilight! We are more than happy to help our friend however we can. What do you need?"

>>8454457
>You are now Anonymous again, and you understand.
>Feral anon looks up at you with the eyes on fire again. It does not phase you as it did before though.
>You understand his plight, the poor thing. It is your plight as well, but you got the better half of the deal by far.
>There is nothing that can realistically be done for him however.
The two that were once whole, have grown in separate directions. Such that they can never be made whole with each other again. I am sorry, but this is the way things must be.
>i have heard this too many times.
>A spiderweb of cracks begin to form on the formerly pristine surface of the "world".
>The pain that has been steadily increasing ever since waking in this realm, jumps in magnitude, reaching a zenith, as the world around you shatters into millions of shards glinting in the light like so many diamonds falling from the sky.
>The last thing you see of the world, is your reflection break into a horrible smile, before his visage is shattered like the rest of the world around him.
>You fall into a vast and indiscernible emptiness.
>You hear sounds, of children's laughter, of their tears, of a loved one's voice, and then all is silent, and all is still.

>>8454545
>You are now Twilight Sparkle again, and you are glad Luna trusts you as much as she does. Perhaps it's mere naiveté, perhaps she still harbors something against her sister. Regardless she has stood by you in this your time of struggle.
>You are having difficulty dodging the Princess's magical volleys. you know she wouldn't hurt you, but you cannot afford to lose this duel.
>Should you succeed, she has promised to answer your questions. Should you fail, you will never again see your beloved Anonymous.
>This thought drives you to let loose your own shots against your teacher.
>She has experience, speed, power, and skill. But you know from studying under her that she also has vanity.
>You haven't had many opportunities to duel like this before, but you have always prided yourself on being able to learn form your experiences.
>Luna is being overly aggressive, she will likely exhaust herself from expelling such energy.
>She is helping to keep Celestia off of your flank for the moment though, so you won't complain.
>For each shot thrown her way, Celestia simply sidesteps, leaps, or shields herself. Always wearing a smile that speaks of confidence, and certainty.
>As confident as she appears to be however, you know that the two of you are steadily wearing her down.
>Sweat gleams along her coat, and her breathing has steadily grown more labored. She begins to laugh, exclaiming very now and then about how much fun she's having.
>You know she's merely attempting to throw you out of your comfort zone. It seems to be working on Luna though.


sorry for so many shifts

>>8454576
>"Sister! We will claim victory this day! We have kept in better shape than you!"
>Poor choice of words Luna. Celestia is not overly sensitive about mangy things, but among those, she is most sensitive about her figure.
>Celestia drops the smile, and you see a fire in her eyes. She stops, plants her hooves solidly on the ground and erect s a barrier about herself.
>Luna begins hammering at the defense, and before you can warn her of the trap she is falling into, the shield is dispelled outwards, sending the younger Princess back onto her flank. As her vision re-settles after the blast, a hail of bolts rains down upon her, dying her entire coat (save for her belly) the pink of Celestia's blasts.
>She's definitely out. And she's actually out cold, so it's just you and your now enraged teacher.
>"And what do You think My Faithful Student! I'm still a pretty Princess aren't I!?" The Princess is now firing with reckless abandon, sending shots wide, bouncing them around the room.
>The display would be beautiful and impressive if it weren't for the context in which it came a bout.
>As it stands, it frightens you, and you do your best to ball up, and hop out of the way of stray shots.
>This continues fro a solid four minutes before the Pretty princess settles down, drenched in sweat, and panting tiredly.
>You are doing little better, but with the little energy you didn't use blocking or dodging out of the way of the blasts, you let loose a pin prick of energy in her direction.
>She doesn't notice as it makes its slow path through the room. She does however notice, when it hits square in the center of her cutiemark.
Of course I think you're beautiful Princess. Luna was just messing around with you, I'm sure.
>The Princess takes a deep breath, composing herself, and goes back to her customary grin, and then into a light chuckle
>"Well done my student. You have earned your answer. But to fully understand it, you will need to trust me wholly."

>>8454603
I do princess, I do with all of my heart.
>"Very well, help me with my sister, and then we will take a walk."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ynrSEjHyRI&list=FLVRdsxaC7TdCA_0DC2AnU_g&index=155
>You are Anonymous.
>And this is not good.
>You can see what's happening to you, feel it, hear it, but you can't move. You can do nothing as the madman tackles you to the ground, raking his nails across your face, drawing blood.
>You can do nothing as he grabs a stone of to the side and brings it down upon your hand, easily breaking at least two of your fingers.
>All the while, his eyes remain fixed upon yours, never blinking, burning into your soul.
>You can hear his voice, inside your head.
>i am sorry to need to do this to us. But inside, there is something that keeps me at bay. Out here, there is only the flesh, bone, and sinew.
>If i break you, you will have to return to me. You will have to.
>There is a great deal of uncertainty in his "voice" upon repeating himself.
>He is desperate. Perhaps he's correct, if he kills you, maybe you will go back to being one person. But what if he's not? And what if you don't want to be one person anymore?
>What you said in the mirror world resounds in your head, and you feel a great resolve fill your body.
>You will not cry out, even if you cannot fight back, he will not break you like this

>>8454643
What was once whole, has been shattered in two. It cannot be mended, no matter what you try. You are lost to your madness, and my death will change nothing for you.
>The feral man continues beating away at your body, but you have stopped feeling any kind of pain from his attacks.
>You still cannot move while under his piercing gaze, but you have your wits about you.
Suddenly, off to the side, you can hear the rustling of leaves, and hear the feral anon make a cry at the interloper.
>His broken eye contact gives you the opportunity to push him off, and as you scramble to your feet, you notice that night has fallen, and that your visitor and inadvertent savior is none other than Fluttershy.
>She looks almost as surprised as you did when she spots the second Anon.
>A look of terror comes over his face, and a look of recognition comes over hers.
>Her presence fills the two of you with fear, but you are at the same time grateful to her for stopping the beating.
>She takes a step forward, then another, and another, and before he knows it, she she has made her way to within an inch of him.
>She has him trapped in the stare, just as he had you trapped in his.
>It all appears to be too much for him as he lets out a terrifying howl, and collapses unconscious before her.
>Your injuries finally catch up with you, a mangled hand, slashes across your face, possibly a broken arm, possibly broken ribs, the pain is searing, and reduces you to little more than a whimpering mess.
>Events pass at an alarming rate, and you regain your senses in a hospital. Bound and gagged.
End of Day 4

>>8454659
And there we go, i'm not sure if the next part is the finale, or it's predecessor, but i do know that things are soon to end.
I'm sorry if the whole magic tag thing seems pointless, also I'm fairly certain i lifted the idea from lulu, so sorry if you mind.
>Questions Comments, concerns, etc.

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>>8454718

Sorry for interupting

>>8454718
Loved it
just don't go on hiatus again, I hate waiting

Not to shitpost, but what do you writefags do for pre writing?

Do you list the main events of the chapter and develop details based on that, or do you develop new ideas as a result of the flow of writing?

>>8455091
I hope i don't disappoint friend, and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
>Also, this thread need sustenance, so i shall post something else.
>>8455795
I don't prewrite, which is bad, and i should start

Day Sympathy in Equestria
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBecM3CQVD8
>You find yourself walking through a forest.
>How you came to be walking through a forest, you have no idea.
>When you've lived as long as you have, events tend to blur together, especially if they don't catch your attention.
>You know you're walking the right way.
>There are innocent souls up ahead, and you've always enjoyed their company.
>A few pesky cats try and make a morsel of you. They soon learn to give you a wide berth though.
>Interesting chemical composition of the poison in their stingers.
>Someone could easily describe it as magical.
>This whole area, seems to feel of old magic.
>It's a refreshing change from the smoke and atheism of the big cities.
>You reach a clearing, and see through the bushes what looks to be a village.
>Villages, were perfect breeding grounds for superstitions. You loved villages.
>You take a deep breath, straighten your tie, and put on the winning smile you've perfected over your long life.

>>8455867
>As you head into the village center, you see how odd it's inhabitants are.
>Apparently, you ain't in kanas no more!
>There are small colorful horses milling about, some have wings, some have horns, and some have no discernible difference to the ones you're used to.
>And they can talk!
>You really do learn something new every day.

>A few regard you with curiosity, but many give you a relatively wide berth.
>There is one that doesn't seem to be phased by your presence. A mint green unicorn, with amber irises and a lyre emblazoned upon her flank.
>Her eyes appear to water as you allow her to examine your hands. She seems to be fascinated with your fingers, and their joints.
>You don't mind the attention, the opposite in fact. As the small horse continues her examination, a group of six more p0nies begins making their way towards you.
>One purple unicorn is the first to actually speak with you.
>She introduces herself as Twilight Sparkle, and extends a hoof to you, in what is likely a sign of peace.
>You enjoy the serenity of wherever it is you've found yourself, so you'll keep the nice guy act going for awhile.

>>8455880
>You shake hands (hooves?) with each of the p0nies, and note that three of them, the white unicorn Rarity, and both of the Pegasi seem to have developed a crush on you.
>How sweet.
>The purple Unicorn, who seems to lead the group grows excited, asking you questions, trying to understand what you are.
>You haven't played this game in a while.
>The day passes in a similar fashion, and as night begins to fall on the quaint little village, a flying chariot alights just outside the library you've all gathered inside.
>A pair of armored pegasi enter, and Twilight Sparkle greets them, inquiring if they're here because of her letter.
>The pair nod their heads in the affirmative, and the purple unicorn begins hopping in excitement.

>She tells you, that the two of you will be heading over to the capital city of this magical pony land, to meet with the "princess".
>You grow as excited as she has.
>The two of you bid adieu the five "friends" who are staying behind and climb aboard the chariot.
>The trip is fairly quick, and you spend it chatting with Twilight.
>You land right in front of the castle, and Twilight dismisses the guards, assuring them the two of you will be fine.

>>8455898
>The castle is fairly impressive when you get inside, with long hallways, many rooms, and high ceilings.
>You find your way alongside Twilight to a pair of Double doors, flanked on either side by two pairs of guards. They open the door for you.
>There at the end of a long carpet and a large room, sits a rather majestic Unicorn with wings, and another Pegasi with a horn.
>The smaller of the two is a beautiful shade of blue, with a mane like the night sky .
>The larger one, is a pristine white, and a mane of all the colors of the spectrum.
>You can feel the vast magic they are in possession of.
>Upon seeing you, a glint of understanding comes to the larger Allicorn's eyes.
>It brings a quiet smile to your face.
>Before anyone can say anything, you decide to greet your benefactor.
Please allow me to introduce myself.
I am a man of wealth and taste.
I've been around for a long, long year.
Stolen many a man's soul and faith.
I was 'round when Jesus Christ had his moment, of doubt and pain.
I made damn sure that Pilate washed his hands, and sealed his fate.
Pleased to meet you.
Won't you guess my name?

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>>8454326
I look forward to it.

>>8455916
end
hopefully thread will wake up soon, I'm worried i may have actually killed it

>>8455795
I like to outline it point by point.
Example.
1. Anon is gay
2.Flutters tries to hook up with him
3. reveals that he is flaming homo
4. FL sad
5. New idea
6. Gay club or bathhouse
7. Caramel >rape
8. punchline

Then as I write, I fill in gaps. If the story changes organically, then I am fine with that as well.

>>8455940
You didn't kill it man.
I'm still lurking.
Will be posting 2nd DoP part 11 in the next hour or so.
Putting some finishing touches on it.
>Typo hunting.

Man, I've been writing quickly recently. Maybe I should use this time off from school to actually do work instead of writing this shit. But hell, it's fun.

Thanks to everyone who's been reading so far, I hope you're having as much fun with it as I am.

Previous part can be found here:
http://pastebin.com/e0tNce90

>>8456141

>Pinkie Pie asks all kinds of questions as you help her bake her goods
>Where you’re from, what you are, how you got here
>Not unlike Fluttershy
>Except, Pinkie steered clear from the personal questions
>She probably knows better than to ask about your private business
>Or just didn’t want to
>…then why did Fluttershy?
>…well, not really important
>You put the thought out of your head
>It’s gotten late into the afternoon as you mix batter, planning your party with the pink p0ny
>”And we should have music! And games! And STREAMERS! What party is complete without streamers!?”
>You giggle to yourself
Yeah, we’ll definitely need all of those!
>You continue mixing your batter
What about sweets? We have to have sweets at a party!
>”OF COURSE!!”
>You smile widely
>No one has ever made you feel more at home than Pinkie
>She’s a lot like you, actually
>A little more eccentric and hyper
>But definitely a lot like you
>Smiley, optimistic, spreading cheer
>She’ll definitely be your go-to p0ny
>You and Pinkie pour the cake batter into a pan and throw it in the oven
>You’ve already made dozens of cupcakes and cookies, so there’s not much else to do while you wait

1/?

>>8456160

>Pinkie takes off her apron and hops up on the island table, making herself comfortable
>You lean against it and cross your arms
>”So you stayed over at Fluttershy’s last night, huh?” she asks
>You glance over to her
Yup. Letting me crash there was real kind of her.
>She giggles
>”Of course! Fluttershy is the kindest!”
Yeah,
>You agree with a smile
And a little…
>You stop yourself
>…that may be a little rude of you…
>Pinkie throws on a puzzled expression and tilts her head
>”A little what, Emmy?”
>…Gosh, you don’t want to offend her or anyone…
>…but you’ve felt a sort of bond with Pinkie
>You should be able to tell her your feelings
I dunno, Pinkie Pie. Just a little… awkward.
>She tilts her head the other way
She seems all tense around me. And it kind of rubs off. I don’t know, maybe she’s just nervous around me?
>Pinkie giggles
>”Oh Emmy, Fluttershy’s… well, shy! She’s nervous around a lot of p0nies!”
>You figured as much…
>…honestly, Femanon, you’re overthinking things
Yeah, you’re right, Pinkie.
>You say smiling

2/?

>>8456178

>You glance out the window
>The sun sure is setting fast…
…maybe I ought to go find her. It’s getting late.
>Pinkie gasps
>”Oh, but we still have so much to plan for tomorrow!”
>She gasps again
>”OH I KNOW!” she cheers, “How about we have a sleepover!?”
A sleepover?
>”Yeah!”
>She dashes over to the cupboard with lightning speed
>”I’ve got—“
>She whips out a tray of—
>”Cookies!”
>She drops them to the table and speeds off somewhere else
>”And chocolate milk!”
>She throws it back into the fridge
>”And we can talk and snack and plan more and just hang out!”
>You’re speechless
>How did she move so…
>You shake your head
>Actually, a sleepover sounds… pretty appealing
>You can’t remember the last time any of your girlfriends had one
>It should be… fun
I’d love to, Pinkie.
>You say with a smile
>She beams
>”GREAT!”

3/?

>>8456198

But…
>You lower your head and think for a bit
Maybe I should… I don’t know, tell Fluttershy?
>Pinkie hops over
>”Sure! She should know, right?”
>Yeah…
>Wait, should she?
>She’s not your caretaker or anything…
>Still…
>She found you, and she housed you for the night
>…and you don’t want her to feel left out…
>…yeah, just go tell her, Femanon
>Maybe you and Fluttershy can go do something tomorrow
…yeah. I’ll head over to tell her, and be right back, okay?
>Pinkie’s smile is all the answer you need

>The sun has completely set now, and you’re winding the path to Fluttershy’s cottage
>The lights are all on, and the babbling brook sends wonderful watery tunes into the air
>Living here must be a dream…
>You knock on the door a few times
>You can hear some rustling behind it
>Then, it opens up
>The little yellow winged mare gazes up to you
>”Oh THERE you are, Femanon! I was wondering when you’d come back…”
>You smile at her, a little awkwardly
You know, just thought I’d come by and… let you know about my day.

4/?

>>8456217

>”Oh, of course, I’d love to hear about it! I’ll get some tea started!”
That sounds lovely.
>You and Fluttershy get settled in on her couch
>She makes a kettle of tea for the two of you, and you sip and converse about the day
--And we’re aiming for tomorrow night. It should be a fun time. You’re coming, right?
>She nods happily
>”Oh, I wouldn’t miss it for the world!”
>You sip your tea
That’s great.
>You place it down on the coffee table
Actually, Fluttershy… about the planning…
>Here we go…
>…why is this such a big deal?
>She isn’t your mom!
>She’s not going to take it hard… right…?
We’re not actually done yet… Pinkie asked me to spend the night at her place, so we can finish up. Is that…
>You glance down to your feet
…you know, okay…?
>You twiddle your thumbs
>It’s silent…
>…what’s she thinking?
>You glance up to her, getting a look on her face
>Is that… shock?
>She locks eyes with you
>And her entire expression changes

5/?

>>8456245

>”Why sure, Femanon! I don’t think you really need my ‘permission’ for something like that!”
>A weight is lifted from your chest
>Wow, did she really say that?
>Maybe your perception of Fluttershy was way off
>You smile
Thanks, Flutters.
>She’s smiling too
Hey, I don’t want you to feel left out or anything, though. You’re my friend too. Why don’t we do something tomorrow before the party? Hang out?
>She absolutely beams
>”Oh I’d love to!”
>You sigh a sigh of relief
>There we go…
>No one’s feeling left out or offended
>”Just…”
>Hmm?
>You take another look over to her face
>She looks like what you probably did when you thought she’d take your news poorly
>Nervous, anticipating a response… hmm…
>”Well… you don’t have to… *mumble *”
>She mumbles and glances away
…what was that, Fluttershy?
>She looks back to you
>”Well… you don’t need to… share a bed in a sleepover… right…?”
>You look to her with a puzzled look
>…where did that come from?

6/?

>>8456269

No…?
>…wait, do you?
I don’t think so… I mean, I don’t plan to share a bed with her…
>A look of relief washes over her face
Wait… why?
>Aaaand it’s gone again
>”Oh! Um—“
>She laughs nervously
>”I’m just… curious…?”
>She smiles a nervous, teeth-showing smile
>You think you hear some kind of squeaking noise as she does it
>…it’s better not to question this, you suppose
Alright…
>She exhales
Anyway, Pinkie Pie’s probably waiting. I’ll stop by tomorrow so we can hang out, okay?
>She smiles
>”Okay, Femanon, have fun!”

>You and Pinkie Pie have a great time
>You talk more about the party, about guests, food, etc, all over a plate of the best cookies you’ve ever eaten
>She talks about her other best friends that you HAVE to meet
>They all sound like great p0nies to know
>Maybe even more friends to have here
>You exchange a few jokes and share a few laughs
>Pinkie Pie, in her onesie pajamas, rolls onto her back and laughs, kicking her feet into the air

7/?

>>8456289

>”Emmy, you’re so silly!” she cries as she giggles
>You’re in a giggling fit too
>Gosh, you haven’t had this much fun in God knows how long
>Wiping the tears from your eyes, you take a glance at Pinkie’s clock
>Almost 12am
>Pinkie notices your gaze
>”Thinking about heading to bed, Emmy?”
>You look to her
Heh, yeah, maybe.
>You yawn
I have some things I want to do with Fluttershy before the party. Want to make sure I’m up in time for them.
>”No prob! We can head to bed now!”
>She hops up and trots past you
>”We already planned the whole party, anyway!”
>You smile
Yeah!
>She starts digging through a closet
>”Hey, Emmy, you don’t mind sleeping on the ground or anything do you?”
>She pulls out several sheets, a comforter, and a pillow
>”It’s just that I don’t have a spare bed. It’ll be reeeeeally comfy!”
>You smile
That sounds great, Pinkie Pie.
>And here you were a tad worried she’d ask you to bed with her
>…huh, another thing she hasn’t done that Fluttershy has…
>…maybe sharing a bed isn’t common here…?
>Then why did Fluttershy want to?

8/?

>>8456306

>…or maybe it is common, and Pinkie’s the odd one
>Looking at Pinkie Pie, that may be the case
>Why are you thinking about these things?
>You shake them from your head
>Pinkie Pie has already set up a beautiful looking sleeping area not too far from her own bed
>”TA-DAAA!” she announces gleefully as she reveals it
>You laugh and clap your hands softly
It looks great!
>She beams a hearty smile at you
>”Okay then!”
>She launches herself into her bed
>”Night Emmy!”
>She crashes down onto the bed, the covers bouncing up high and falling neatly down onto her
>She’s already snoring
>…wow, this mare
>You laugh softly to yourself
>You head over to your sleeping area and take off your pants
>You place them to the side and get nice and settled in
>…Hmm…
>…well… you’re not sharing a bed with anyone…
>…yeah, you probably should
>You reach around your back and unhook your bra
>You place it down next to your pants
Ohhh… much better.
>Finally…
>You settle down into your area once more

9/?

>>8456332

>And drift off…

>”… I just don’t know…”
>”I mean, I don’t THINK…”
>”She’s just so…”
>You’re having a dream about you and Pinkie Pie
>You’re hanging out at the party together
>It’s… fun
>”Maybe just…”
>In your sleep, you feel a little tingly
>The dream kind of stops itself
>”Oh… oh my…~”
>Very tingly…
>”…rub… not a… oh, I can’t, I…”
>”But… was saying that…”
>”…just a peek…”
>…you’re not very comfortable…
Ughh…
>”…! Oh … shouldn’t have…”
>”…hope she… awake…”
>You move a little in your sleep
>”Eep!”

>Your eyes flutter open silently
>You gaze up to the ceiling
>Weird how your body works…
>Having a simple dream, then awake just like that…

10/?

>>8455795

Excellent question! Let me outline in the only way I know how...

>Decide on a catchy or pun fueled title
>Decide who will be the person/pony the story focuses on
>Write so many words
>Walk away for hours
>Forget everything
>Come back
>Read what I previously wrote
>Decide to go in a whole new direction
>Add some french dialog usually in spoiler mode text
>Browse /mlp/
>Look for posts ending in doubles and use any ideas they suggest
>Reread what I have written so far
>Decide to take it to 11 and go in a new direction
>Proofread without being too picky
>???
>Profit

This is a typical day for how I would write. Hope you have found it informative! Speaking of which, I should return to writing before bed.

>>8456347

>You turn your head
>Huh…
>A slight draft comes into the room
>Was the window always open…?
>You re-adjust yourself
>Wait…
>You glance down to your body
>Your shirt has been pulled up to around your neck
>Your breasts are completely exposed
>You quickly pull it back down
>You glance over to Pinkie
>…still asleep
>…okay, good
>No one saw anything
>You turn over and try to get back to sleep
>…holy… wait…
>You sit up
>You dart your hand downward and start patting your crotch
>You’re…
>…you’re damp
>…like, REALLY damp. Wet, even
>You can feel your face blush
>How did that…?
>That’s not possible, it’s…
>…unless…
>…oh my…
>…no way… could it…?
>You glance over to the snoozing Pinkie Pie
>Happily sawing logs
>Your mouth gapes
>…you mean, she’s a great friend…
>And you don’t even… you mean, she’s a girl… and a p0ny…
>But…
>Could a simple dream…?
>You pat yourself again
>…could a dream really do that…?

End of Part 2

11/11

>>8456363

There we have it, Part 2 is up! Hope you guys enjoyed it, it was certainly interesting to write to say the least.

And comments/criticisms you'd like to leave, please do, I take everything into consideration.

Got a Pastebin as well, if you want a look-see:
http://pastebin.com/u/Th3seus

Thanks guys, have a good one!

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>>8455795
For my longer stories, I start with an idea of where I want to go, where I'm going to start, and how I'm going to get where I want to.

For my one-shots and shorts, I tend to just come up with a punchline and try to figure out how to develop it.

Either way, when I'm actually writing, I literally just start from the beginning and write. I write from beginning to end, usually all in one sitting.

>>8456363

Femanon writer, Theseus! It is good to see you once more! Excellent work on the sexual tension. Had I known not any better, I'd say this was my fetish. I look forward to Femanon holding her dear friend close to her bosom as they cuddle up and sleep non-sexually

>>8456409
Nice, i like it so far, and the indirect hints of whats happening is a nice change as sopose to
>And she was raped while she slept huehuehue
But instead showing vuge hints and still giving whats going on

>>8450731
when did he ask? I didn't see anything like that in this thread?
>>8451581
*Puts on excited face*
>>8452126
Some of us don't youtube, so when that's the the big hint as to what happened, I won't get it. Feels inbound, but the feels train didn't stop for me.

Those of you who can at all remember "Of All The Possible Places" are in luck, and in unluck, for I am posting the 2nd part, which will be my final piece for these threads. More shall be explained after the story.

>>8456712
No Fluttershy, dusty marehoods are not and never will be my fetish.
>You painfully speak out as Fluttershy does unspeakable things to try an arouse you.
>It's dark, hot and hard to breathe in this damn cave.
>Your mining light ran out of power long ago.
>The perfect spot for a rapist like Fluttershy to try her moves on you.
>Since you're stuck here, you have no choice but to put up with her attempts.
>This is her 3rd attempt since the cave-in, and just like the last two, it failed.
>"Are you sure? Let me check your hot monkey dick, just to make sure."
No. I am positive that sticking dust, the throat's bane, into a horse-
>"Pony."
Into a pony vagina is not something that arouses me.
>She looks down at the floor.
Guilt isn't my fetish either.
>She looks back up and stomps her hooves at the dirt.
>"Darn."
>A few minutes after that escapade, you continue.
>You notice a small trapdoor just in front of you.
>No harm in taking a look.
>"Uhm, let me help you take a closer look."
>Fluttershy pushes you through the trapdoor.
>The fall was just short enough for you to make it out dazed, but otherwise unharmed.
>Fluttershy uses this opportunity to try and unbutton your pants.
>Once your mind realizes what's going and is back in order, you backhand her across the face.
>"*Sniff*sniff*"
>Oh shit.
>Anon you fucking moron.
>Sure she tried to rape you, but she never injured you, this was a complete dick mo-
>"I-is domestic abuse your f-fetish, Anon?"

>>8456740
>Never fucking mind.
>You simply facepalm and stand up.
>Great. Another long mineshaft.
Well, since you so politely pushed me down here I guess we have no choice but to press on.
>You trudge on through this hell, the faint dripping of water becoming ever more annoying.
>Because, as it turns out, it's just Fluttershy drooling over the sight of your covered ass.
>Why did you feel sorry for her again?
>Regardless, the two of you press on, albeit the only thing keeping Fluttershy here is the rape opportunity.
>If it wasn't for that, you'd be taking this trip alone.
>You are now Fluttershy.
>And by Celestia Anon's flank is so beautiful.
>Covered it may be, it's still a sight to behold.
>You just can't help but let your wings fold out at this marvelous sight.
>All that could be yours if you found his fetish one day...
>He will love you one day, that is certain.
>Celestia herself said that working in his environment might make him more attached to you.
>Maybe this is what she meant!
>Normally he only uppercuts you if you try to unbutton his useless and worthless pants.
>This time he only backhanded you! It's a sign! He loves you!
>All these thoughts go through your head, and you can't help but place a hoof lightly on his muscular hindbosom.
>"Fluttershy, ass massages are not my fetish either."
>You already tried that one weeks ago...
>All these conflicting thoughts about your only love make you fail to notice a very loose stone above you.
>As you walk under it, several stones fall onto your back, a couple...breaking your magnificent wings.
>"Fluttershy!"
2/?

>>8456806
>You are now Anon.
>Holy shit, Fluttershy just had a ton of stones fall on her!
>You hold her bruised form in your arms.
>Good god you're so worried about her, you don't want her to die!
Fluttershy! Answer me, are you okay?
>"Yes, my love. I always knew you cared for me."
>Aaaaand it's gone.
>You drop her to the floor.
Alright, just get up and follow along. I'm tired of this shit.
>"B-but Anon. My wings!"
>Upon closer inspection, you don't need a detective to tell her wings are broken.
>She won't be able to fly for about a month or so.
>But she will be able to walk, which translates to delayed and watered down, but still existing rape attempts.
You'll live. Let's go, we're killing time and oxygen.
>No matter what occurs, she'll find a way to try and rape you.
>"A-anon?"
What now? What stupid fucking question do you have for me now?
>"C-could you please hold me? I'm s-scared."
>Her voice had true fear behind it.
>For once, you didn't feel rage from her requests.
>You felt annoyance, that's for damn sure.
>But not rage.
Fine.
>For the next few hours, you've been carrying Fluttershy in your arms.
>Surprisingly, she's rather light.
>You haven't had any rape attempts from her this entire time. Why?
>Instead, she just keeps talking about her animals, and how happy she is to be with you, even if it's here.
>It actually warms your heart somewhat...

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>day insane in equestria
>you are fluttershy and you’re going to anon's!
>you know you got it this time!
>after waking up and getting ready you head on out to anon's house
>you knock on the door when it opens
A: Hello fluttershy"
>then he punches you and everything goes black
>you wake up and everything is a blur and you hear him saying
A: Did I ever tell you that the definition of insanity is... insanity is doing the exact same fucking thing, over and over again expecting shit to change.
A: that, is, crazy,
F: anon I don't kno-"
>you are interrupted by anon
A: The first time somebody told me that, I don't know I thought they were bullshitting me, So boom, I shot him
>anon puts his hand to make a symbol and says boom while putting his thumb down
>you also look and see that your legs are all tied up to a cinder block
A: The thing is, hehehe, he was right, and then I started seeing it everywhere I looked, everywhere I looked, all these fucking pricks , everywhere I looked doing the exact same fucking thing over, and over, and over, and over, and over again thinking this time, is going to be different,
F: a-anon wha-
A: nonono please this time is gonna be different
F: Anon what ar-
A: I'm sorry, I don't like the way.
>he kicks a box
A: You are looking at me! Ok! You have a fucking problem in your head, you think I’m bullshitting you, do you think I’m lying? FUCK YOU! Ok! FUCK! YOU!
F: a-anon y-you’re scaring me...
A: its okay man...hehehe...I'm going to kill you moth-....I am going to- the thing is alright,
>you start to wimper
A: the thing is I already killed you once already, and it's not like I am fucking crazy, its okay
>he points to a hole in the ground
F: ano-
A: It's like water under a bridge....... Did I ever tell you the definition of insanity?
F: w-what are you doing anon?
>anon walks over to a cinder block your tied to and kicks it into the pit
F: Anon no! AHH!
>as you fall into the pit you think one thing
>you'll never get to be
>fucking insane anon

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>>8456857
>You two have been having a conversation about tons of different shit.
>Celestia's tyranny, what Fluttershy actually does besides trying to rape you, and what Canterlot is like.
>You stop, because you're tired as fuck.
I say we rest here for a bit.
>"Alright, Anon. I'll be right here."
>She goes to sit...rather far from you.
>Has she finally learned?
>"Anon? Why don't you love me?"
>Obvious answer is obvious.
It's because you're a crazy rapist.
>"So...if I stopped, you would reconsider?"
>Uhh, shit...
>You were open to the idea of horsefuckery, but this certainly needs some thought.
I probably would.
>Let's hope that holds her off.
>"I'll try, maybe you will love me if I try!"
>God, she's actually rather cute when she's determined for something objectively good.
>Now to rest...
>But it doesn't last long as the space between you and Fluttershy is blocked by the falling stones & boulders.
Fluttershy! Can you hear me?!
>No answer.
Dammit!
>Tears are forming in your eyes.
>You slam your fist into the boulder, obviously to no avail.
Not like this...please not like this...

>>8456859
Oh hell naw you did not inturrupt that story Vaas!

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>>8456859
Jeez, interrupting my final testament, and with a repost too.
>>8456889
That's all folks. I am no longer going to post with this trip, I'm only going to lurk or post as Anon from now on, as I feel my stories are too shitty to post here. Hopefully this installment was of decent quality to post here.
Adieu, gentlemen. It's been an honour.

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>>8456962
OH BOY.
Shit's about to go down.

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Well, I said I'd do a full trilogy sortof deal with Monkey Lord Anon, looks like you friend'o's only get a battle..
It'd be pretty fucking difficult to record, record again, recording a second time just to make sure, AcidX everything, and THEN write something.. just for one part.

>>8457034
>I'm only going to lurk or post as Anon from now on, as I feel my stories are too shitty to post here
Dont be such a fucking drama queen.

>>8457034
Personally, I thought this was very good. I enjoyed it.

>>8456859
Y-you stole my storie faggot...I must kill you now...

>>8457034
Hey man, ain't no story too shitty to post. Don't feel like that's a reason to give up your trip.

>>8457164
I spelt story wrong...

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>>8457104
>>8457164
Anon you srs?

>>8457219
Very....

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>>8457140
this.

Its not that big of a deal. You just put on your trip if someone asks about or for you.

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Aw dis sucka be goin downtown on yo ass bitch nagga cunt!

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>>8457358
beautiful...

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>Day feeling lucky in equestria
>wake up
>shit shower shave
>fall down the stairs but don’t bruise yourself cause
>you’re feeling lucky
>finally after all this time you manage to eat your Fak-eo's cause you’re lucky today
"Wow today must be my lucky day! Not a single knock on the door yet"
>Knock
>knock
>knock
"And my luck is gone...”
>you go over and open the door
"I swear if it's you shyflutter I am goi-"
>you are cut off by a Revolver in your face
>Fluttershy fires the gun several times all over
"W-What the hell yhs!"
>F: Ah-ah, I know what you’re thinking, Did she fire six shot's? Or only five...Well to tell you the truth in all the excitement I kinda lost track myself, But in the end this is a 44 magnum the most powerful handgun in the world, and would blow your head clean off, you got to ask yourself one question 'Do I feel lucky?'...well do you buck?
>you stare at her
>F: good...
"But flutts...Ah got's to know"
>she pulls back the hammer pulls the trigger and then there was a loud click
>With that you take the gun from fluttershy
>F: I-is Dirty Harry your fetish?
"No fluttershy... But I do feel lucky"
>you pull back the hammer pulling the trigger and the gun fires
"OH SHIZ, IT WAS LOADED STILL!"
>now you’re going to pony Jail
>because today was your
>fucking lucky day
>fucking Harry

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>>8457463

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Monkey Lord Anon
[Sorry guys, no time to do a whole 20 part.. this would be complicated and time consuming, so a one shot?]
>You're Anon, you've been in Equestria for... how many days now... lost count :I
>So, it's Day Something in Equestria, if it's helpful at all, no calendars..
>You get up out of bed.. you shit, you shower, you sh-
>Wait no.. You're Monkey Lord Anon.. you can't shave off your super powers..
>Your guitar playing skills rely in that wonderful beard of glory and power.. it's almost wizard status.
>You get out of the shower, comb your beard and your Jesus hair that flows down mid-back..
>You step into the kitchen, completely naked.. your only clothes are one of the few guitars you had on you before the aliens took you to this magical place
>More specifically, this bad boy.. http://www.espguitars.com/guitars/esp-standard/m2-ntb.html
>During a rock show in Stonehenge..
> That song, "free bird" you played for guitar hero II didn't go too well, you didn't even get to pack before they took you.
>You grab your breakfast and slam it down..
>The doorbell rings.. It's Tenacious D singing Master Exploder.
>You answer the door, it's Fluttershy, guessing your fetish.
>Usually it's a, "Hi Anon! Is p0nies swallowing icecubes and mayonnaise your fetish? GAK
>But she's got with her.. a guitar?
>And an ORANGE stack?!
>Dis gun be good..
>She clears her throat and turns on her crate..
>You look at it in complete jealousy.. [pic related]
So what have you got there?
>'I'm guessing your fetish??'
>It could be.. Necrophilia and Monster Jams are kindof tied..
Maybe? Depending on if you can play it..
>'This sweet ol' thing? Let me serenade you Anon!'
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>>8457514
>She begins playing a classical tune..
>Bouree in Em
>Extremely fucking boring, this is crackerbox compared to your likes, you almost close the door until she turns the tables of genre..
>She's transitioning from classical to heavy metal.. impressive.
>She looks at you with a squee, you grab your pick, and turn on the Marshall stack next to you..
>You slam down a quick riff, she almost blushes and says in a quiet manner..
>'Oh, that's what you're into? I'm not sure if I've perfected that method of playing yet.'
>You roll your eyes..
Well, there's always a first to try... show me what you've got flutterfuck..
>You hoist your guitar.. as Fluttershy grabs her pick Don't ask me how.. .. and prepares for the duel of her life..
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1QlRdrDiQsk
Sudden quality change, I'm upset. I spend all day repeatedly recording this due to fuck ups, and now I'm subjected to lower quality, vocaroo's a bugger.
>The battle is over.. you're intimidated..
>Almost be-stounted..
>You and Fluttershy's hair blow beautifully in the breeze of the thunderstorm caused by a rock battle such as this..
>The staredown ends.. Fluttershy lowers her guitar.. it's come down to
>Who's gonna give up mentally first?
>She trots forward and hands you her guitar..
>'I tried so hard to impress you Anon.. I tried so hard.'
>You look down upon the yellow prodigy.. who nearly beat you..
It's okay, my pupil.. we all start somewhere, and we all work ourselves up. The reason why we fall to those below us.. is so that we can pick ourselves back up.
>She looks back at you with a smile and a tear in her eye..
Now practice hard.. and practice well.. time and efficiency is everything, technique is critical to playing.
>You shoo her off, she retreats happily back to her cottage.. probably to practice and try again a later day..
>You close the door and regain your nerve.. you've nearly been beaten at your own game..
>Fucking Fluttershy.
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>>8457463
I enter the thread and see this?
Does this mean I am good now?
Am I popular enough for people to steal my stories?

>>8457514
When I read the title I thought you were going to do an Anon Journey to the West set in equestria.

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I summon thee!

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>>8457587
Comments, criticism, questions, ect.


>>8457730
Do you even Monkey lord m8?

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>>8457587
Holy fucking shit my nipples are so hard listening to that Urban.

You win all of my praise right now.

Holy shit.

Huehuehuehueheuheuheuhuehue

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>>8457792
You rang good sir?

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>>8457906
wut

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>>8457921
Good night flutterrape

leaving this for you, buddy

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>>8457921
Is thy working on a story or lurking?

>>8457968
Goodnight.
I'll collect your soul while you sleep
>>8457975
I'm working a story, I'm almost finished.
I'm making sure the next part is split evenly so I don't have to worry about going over the character limit while in the middle of posting.
Is there anything else I can help you with?

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>>8457921
I'm gonna be busy, but I thought I'd wish you good luck through the thread, thought a dog might cheer you up.

Best of luck, how is the next part of your story coming by the way?

>>8458076
Is my soul safe from collection?

>>8458141
It's never safe...

>>8458084
For future reference.
Bon Bon or Cats would cheer me up.
And thank you.

I hope you guys enjoy the next part of 2nd DoP part 11
In other news I have been tossing some ideas around for Applejack The Jimmy Rustler part 5, so expect something in the next week or so.
Stoner in Equestria part 3 and Grump Old Fuck part 3 should be finished by then too.
Assuming life doesn't want to troll me
>>8458141
Yes you are safe.
Only the ones that posts dogs are in danger.

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>>8458084
Tell the world...

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>>8458076
>Implying I have a soul
>666 get
pic unrelated, I just love it, deep down in my so-...heart

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>>8458241
Cat Bon Bon?

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>>8458312
As in how I like this?

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>>8458312
Hiding something?
>>8458372
Yes, Cat Bon Bon would be awesome!

Gizmo..I-is that you?

dead thread

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>>8458941
Thread isn't dead, it's a ghost town all of a sudden but it's not dead.

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>>8459013
Right here bro,

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hey i posted a while back asking if anyone had heard from slasher since the s3 finale and people said no i still havent seen any posts from him since and to be honest im kinda worried for him.
i mean no offence to slasher but he wasnt the most balanced individual and i remember him REALLY liking twilight.
can anyone confirm slasher is still out there?
because i neeed him to finish his stories first if hes gonna kill himself

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>>8459728
Im afraid he removed himself anon

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Just lurking and hoping 2DoP gets posted tonight

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>>8459792
NOOOOOOOOOO

>>8459792
Special troll needs special

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>>8459906
>Special troll needs special
Wrong thread dude

>>8459981
Lyra is so hot that she makes me moist

We should call this Lyrrape

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>>8460057
Fund it

>>8458076
use notepad++.
select the section you intend to use for one post
on the bottom you will see the character count for your selection, seperate from the rest of the story
ensure it's 2000 or less words
kill the batman
???
PROFIT!

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>>8460057

Implying we would be unwilling to make sweet tender love to Lyra

>>8460122
We can pretend so she can still consider it >rape

>>8460098
I have no money

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>>8460183
>not having money
pleb

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>>8460183

I like this idea of pretending not to want it while secretly enabling Lyra's attempts. Maybe Fluttershy becomes jealous that her attempts fail every time while Lyra makes it look so easy.

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>>8460226
Sorry I spent all my bits in HP potions

Now enough chatter, i`ll go back to lurking because my hand-wound just opened for typing

>>8460470
Oh shit, I loved that game! I used to play with my brother where he'd be the blue dude, and I'd be the yellow dude, and good times would be had by all.

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>>8460470
>in HP potions
>in

>>8460644
And we`ll all be dudes

you made my hand bleed, out I gp

>>8460689
No, he spent all of his money investing in potions.

Alright folks it's time to dump some dumpage.
I wasn't really at the top of my game on this part.
So I'd like to apologize in advance if it isn't up to par with my previous work.
Ignore any typos you may see, those little shits get away every time.
As always, feedback and constructive criticism is welcomed. Gotta improve somehow right?
The Second Day of Peace part 10:http://pastebin.com/XwiThu09
I hope you enjoy this coming part.

>>8461030

>You are Celestia.
>And Anon is in for it.
>Poor thing won't even see it coming.
>It's only a matter of time now.
>Your sister was just telling you that her plan to get Fluttershy and Anon is working perfectly.
>Even though you don't really approve of her lying to him about what's going to spark romance between the two.
>But in the meantime, just relax and watch Anon and Fluttershy blossom into a beautiful thing.
>Even then, if for some weird reason when it doesn't work out, you'll be there to pick up the pieces.
>You'd hate to see him heartbroken and from looking at his life, he's no stranger to the feeling.
>On a brighter note, he called you Celly. That's a cute little pet name.
>Now for those belly rubs, you've been a bit stressed lately, he showed up at the perfect time.
>With hands like that, he can call you whatever he desires.
>Mmmmm good times will be had. One night, just one night with him.
>Whew, gotta calm down now.
>”Sister, I'm going to retire for now.”
“Alright, sleep well, oh and no more messing with Anon in his sleep okay?”
>”Alright fair enough.” she said with a chuckle.
>Luna gets up from the table and walks out of the dining hall.
>In the meantime you'll finish up your lunch.
>Once finished, you're marching down to Anon's room and DEMANDING a belly rub.
>Okay at least be nice about it.
>Today is going to be a good day.
>A few minutes later, you finish your meal, now to head on over to Anon's room.
>He should be up by now.
>You do your royal trot shuffle into the hallway.

>>8461074

>You let your mind drift to wherever.
>So it's peach honey that's going to seal the deal for Anon eh?
>That explains why Luna was so quick to give Fluttershy peach honey and told her to use it wisely.
>Fluttershy certainly seems to have Anon cornered and yet he has no idea.
>You'll stay quiet and let the events unfold.
>You finally make it to Anon's room.
>You put your ear to the door to see if you're interrupting something
>”.... Looks like mamma is gonna have to teach a lesson about telling fibs too.”
>Oh wow, seems like that peach honey did the trick.
>You knock on the door.
>No one response.
>You knock again with your ear still to the door.
>”Awww, and here I was having fun, this isn't over Anon.”
>”Hold on I'm coming!!”
>”Oh yes daddy put it where you want it!”
>Well that escalated quickly.
>You can get that belly rub later, let them have there fun for now.
“Oh I'll come back a little later. Carry on.”
>You walk away with a smile on your face.
>Seems like Anon has finally decided to start...
>Fucking Fluttershy.

>>8461091

*A few minutes earlier or some shit like that*

>You are Anon.
>You're about to do the technically still morning routine.
>Fluttershy is still in the room laying on the bed that you and her slept in apparently.
>Still blushing from the hug you gave her.
>She's earned some cool points for getting you a jar a peach honey.
>You make your way to the master bathroom they have.
>Close and lock the door behind you.
>No way in hell Fluttershy is getting a free peep show. She's still on the hunt for da D.
>You proceed to do the morning ritual.
>Shit, shower, shave.
>Oh for fuck's sake, you forgot to get your clothes you were going to change into again.
>Thank God there's a towel rack.
>You grab a towel and wrap it around your waist.
>You peek your head out of the door for a moment to see if your personal rapist is on the prowl.
>She seems to have left the room.
>You summon the speed of the Rainboom and dash your way to your suitcase that's on your side of the bed.
>You open it and pull out a pair of jeans and a simple shirt. Nothing special.
>Once you laid them on the bed, you notice a picture that falls out from the folded up clothes.
>You see only the back of it which has a little title. “What's waiting for you.”
>You turn the picture over and see Fluttershy in green and pink high knee socks with her tail lifted revealing her dripping plot as she looks back at you with the bedroom eyes.
>Alrighty then.
>Damn you Fluttershy and dat flank.
>Not gonna lie, she's gotta nice flank for a pony.
“Oh for fuck sake's Fluttershy, get a grip.” you said to yourself.
>”Gladly, I'd love to get a nice grip on that hot...monkey...dick.”
>You nearly jumped out of your skin from that response.
>Dafuq? You thought she wasn't around.
>Oh shit, you're still in only a towel.
>You look around to see where the source of her voice is coming from.
“Show yourself yellow succubus.”
>She pops her head from under the bed. “Hi.” She said with a blush.

>>8461105

“Flutters, please leave. I just got outta the shower.”
>She crawls from under the bed and stands up.
>”I can see that.”
“Mind going out of the room? I'd like to change in peace.”
>She begins walking around you like a shark. “You'd like that wouldn't you?”
>She brushes her flank against you nether no-no area.
>You can feel her raping you in her mind.
>You feel her one of her wings slowly tugs away your towel.
>In one quick snatch, you're bare ass naked.
>Instantly you cover your most valued area.
“Oi! Flutters, cease this Tom Foolery right now.”
>You grab your clothes and slowly back away toward the bathroom as Fluttershy keeps circling around you. Holding the towel with her wing.
>Okay Universe you've won. Now stahp, you've prooven your point.
>”So Anon, I haven't made a fetish guess in a while....”
“And? So what? We're in the Princesses castle for crying out loud.”
>”I don't care...So...Anon...”
“What?”
>Her tail slaps against your ass swiftly.
“Hey! Watch where you're swinging that tail!”
>”Oh I am, so Anon...is being spanked your fetish?”
>Oh god she's onto something.
>Getting a bit close to what your actual fetish is.
“What are you cr-”
>She interrupts you with another quick strike with her tail on your ass once again, leaving a sting in it's place.
“Hey cut it out!”
>”I don't hear a “no” Anon.”
>You fumble with the simple word “No” why is beyond you.
>You rush your way to the bathroom, only to have Fluttershy block you path.
“Flutters, please move the fuck out of the way.”
>She equips her rape face and takes the towel she's holding with her wing and begins twisting it into a whip.
>She can do that?

>>8456559
Why thank you, good sir.

>>8456520
Nonsexual cuddling, hmm...?

>>8461119

>Oh God.
>No, you thought those days were over.
>That shit is deadly. So many painful locker room memories.
>”So, Anon, I think we should work on that nasty language you seem to have.”
>She puts the towel/whip in her mouth and rushes toward you and cracks the towel whip to intimidate you.
>She grabs the towel with her hoof ”Swearing in front of the princesses at the dinning table, shame on you.”
>You bolt for it, running any direction away from that deadly as fuck towel.
>You should have had a tighter grip on the tighter towel, you idjit.
>She flies around chasing you around the room with the deadly weapon of ass destruction in her hoofs swinging away.
>”You can't run forever Anon.”
>She snaps and whips and cracks the whip toward you.
>Hitting you every time on your bare butt and legs.
>Bitch got aim.
“Ow! Fuck Fluttershy, that shit hurts!!”
>”Again with the language? Please tell me this is your fetish, I would have so much fun with this.”
“It's not! I swear it!!”
>She stops of a moment and flutters in place.
>She raises an eye brow in disbelief. “Orly? You seem to be enjoying this.” she said as she locked her eyes on your package.
>You look down and find your standing at attention.
>Oh God, this can't end well.
>Fuck you boner, always getting people in trouble.
>She cracks the deadly towel whip at you leg once again and you jump in agony and land on your ass on the soft bed.
>Another swift strike hits your thigh.
>She's enjoying this way too much.

>>8461138

“Knock it off! Damn at least let me get into my clothes first before you begin you Flutter fetish cluster fuck of foolery.”
>”There's that language again. It's like you want to be spanked.”
“I don't.”
>”Liar. Looks like mamma is gonna have to teach a lesson about telling fibs too.”
>She raises the towel again and gets it ready for another strike.
>Suddenly a knock at the door.
>Thank you God.
>Knocking persists
>She puts on a frown.
>”Awww, and here I was having so much fun, this isn't over Anon.”
>You scramble and put your clothes on quickly.
“Hold on I'm coming!!” you said to the person behind the door.
>”Oh yes daddy put it where you want it!” she chimed in.
>Oh for fuck's sake, watch your phrasing next time.
>That little perverted joker.
>You hear a voice on the other side of the door.
>“Oh I'll come back a little later. Carry on.”
>Great, now whoever that was must be thinking you and Fluttershy are getting it on.
>Fuck.
>You rush out of bed toward the door as Fluttershy keeps cracking that towel toward you.
>Thank goodness you at least have some clothes on some boxers and you jeans that are half way up.
>It doesn't sting as bad now.
>Your shirt is still laying on the bed.
>You open the door and look to your left and find Celestia is walking away.
“Wait! Princess!”
>She stops and turns around and meets you at the door.
>You only have the door half way opened as you stand in the way.
“Can I help you with something your majesty?”
>”I was going to request a belly rub but...”
>She gives you a good look over.
>You're half way naked.
>Your hair has been ruffled up.
>You're breathing heavy.
>The room smells like there was a fuck session that just went down.
>She leans sideways and takes a peep of the room and see that the bed sheets have been tossed and rustled with.
>This isn't what it looks like by a long shot.

>>8461161

>Fluttershy is fluttering right behind you and whispering sweet nothings into your ear.
>”I can see you two are a little busy, I'll come back later.”
>You chuckle nervously and rub the back of your next awkwardly.
“What? Oh no no no it's not like that. I was just telling Fluttershy that...”
>You realized what you was about to say.
>Fuck how do you tell the ruler of Equestria that spanking isn't your fetish without it sounding like you and Fluttershy were experimenting with fetishes?
>It's going to sound awkward.
“I was just telling Fluttershy that spanking isn't my fetish.”
>Suddenly, you feel Fluttershy's hoof slap your ass playfully.
>”Liar.” She whispered.
>You cut a glare towards Fluttershy, she probably didn't see it anyway.
>Fucking Fluttershy.
>Celestia equips her poker face.
>"Oh okay."
>There's a moment of silence.
>Dat ghetti
“I'll be there in a few minutes, ummm where do you want to meet up?”
>”Oh in the pool area will do just fine.”
“Okay, see you in a few, I still gotta get ready.”
>Celestia raises an eye brow and gives you a “Suuure.” look.
>”Okay Anon, while you get “ready” I'll be waiting. Don't take too long alright?”
“You got it.”
>Celestia trots away with a smile on her face.
>You guess she really looks forward to it.
>You close the door and turn around.

>>8461178

“Fluttershy, what the fuck?!”
>”There's that language again, I'm pretty sure spanking is your fetish.”
“Whoa, no no no you've got it all wrong Flutters.”
>”Oh do I?”
“Yes you do, now move I need to get my shirt.”
>She moves out of the way as you walk back to the bed she slaps you ass one last time.
“Oi! Would you stop that?”
>”What? That's for what you're going to do.”
>You groan in frustration as you reach and grab your shirt.
>Dis Pone Hur.
>You finally put on your shirt and begin walking back to the door.
>Fluttershy flutters close behind you with the towel still in her hoofs.
>You gulp as you make your way to the door, she's like a deadly wasp with that thing.
>You speed up your walking and make it to the door.
>She cracks the towel whip once again, forcing you to jump in panic.
>"Oh this is going to be too much fun."
>You run into a full blown sprint as you open the door and bust that left turn in the hallway.
>Fluttershy's close behind, since when did she have this kind of speed?
>You can usually out run her.
"Oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck..."

>>8461199

>"Where you going Anon?! The pool is the other way!"
>You shut down your evasive mode and slow down to a complete stop and turn to her direction.
"Alright, lead the way Flutters."
>She hangs the towel around her neck and lands next to you and walks beside you.
>"Just you wait until we get back to our room, you're gonna get it mister."
>Well...shit.
>Fucking Fluttershy.
>You make your little walk and pass your room again.
>"Oh Anon, would you mind waiting for a moment? There are some things I need to get."
>You roll your eyes in annoyance.
"Oh alright."
>She smile and blows a kiss your way.
>You ignore it and lean against the frame of the door.
"Just hurry up okay?"
>She nods in agreement and walks inside the room.
>You check your wrist watch that isn't there.
>You have no idea what's the current time.
>A few seconds later Fluttershy comes out with some cool shades and one of those pool bed floater thingy ma bobbers and the deadly towel of doom still hanging around her neck.
>Why can't you ever know the name of pool stuff?
>You're going to have to check out a book on that to familiarize yourself with pool stuff.
>"Okay hun, I'm ready let's go."
>You follow her close behind as the two of you make your way to the outdoor pool area.
>Well, you assume it's outdoors anyway.
>You and Fluttershy strike up a conversation as you make your way to the pool.
>"So Anon, there's one thing that I have never done with you."
"Flutters, there's a lot of things you have never done with me."
>"I mean there's something that I'm surprised that never came to my mind."
"And what's that?"
>"I never bothered to actually ask you what your is fetish, I only made guesses."
"Yeah, you tend to do that."
>"So without further ado..."
"Yeah?"

>>8461212

>"What exactly is your fetish Anon?"
"HA! That's like asking for The Doctor's real name."
>"Ummm...Doctor Who?"
"That's the question that must never be answered. Don't worry about it."
>"Can you at least give me a hint of your fetish"
"Ha no."
>"Please? PUH-LEASE?"
>Damn it, you're getting close to a diabeetus overload.
>She's so fucking adorable when she begs.
"Okay, I'll tell a little bit of info."
>She perks her ears up and turns them your direction.
>"I'm listening Anon."
"Okay, I'll tell you two things."
>"Mhm?"
"One, I have more than one fetish."
>"Orly now? How many?"
"Now that, I won't tell you."
>"Darn, okay what's the second?"
"Applejack knows one of them."
>"Well looks like I'm going to Sweet Apple Acres when we get back."
"HA! Don't bother, I made her Pinkie Promise to keep quiet."
>"Well...shit."
>You gasp playfully.
"Why, Fluttershy, such language! And I'm the one the that needs a lesson in swearing?"
>"Oh? Are you gonna teach me a lesson? I'm a bit slow in learning, you'll have to take your time with me. Fuck, shit, bitch, ass, cunt, motherfucker. Oh my, I'm in for it aren't I?"
>Anon, dafuq man? You should have seen that coming, this is Fluttershy we're dealing with here.

>>8461227

>You walked right into that one, you idjit maggot.
>Wait maybe you can turn this around.
"Oh Granny Smith is going to hear about this. She'll teach you a thing or two."
>"Yeeeah, I'm gonna have to jot that down on my NOPEpad."
"Flutters, really? NOPEpad? You stole that from Twi didn't you?"
>"Twi? You mean Grape Intelligence?"
>You burst into a storm of laughter.
>Fluttershy joins you in the having of giggles.
>"Was the genius or what?"
"SO stealing that one."
>"Hey, you better give me credit. Or I'll suddenly decide to see if pegging is your fetish."
"Whoa hey now, no need for extreme threats, you'll get your credit. Damn Flutters, you scary."
>"Oh I'm not that scary, Anon. Just stay on my good side."
"Flutters, I'm pretty sure I couldn't get away from my good side if I tried."
>"You're lucky I love you."
"Yeah yeah."

>>8461246

>Before you know it, you and Fluttershy make to the outdoor pool.
>The sun is shining, and birds are chirping.
>It's actually pretty warm, perfect weather.
>You hate the cold with a passion.
>You see Celestia lying down in one of those comfy looking pool recliner bench thingy ma whozit.
>Fluttershy tosses her floatable comfy bed thingy into the pool and puts her cool shades on and hops on and drifts away in relaxation with a deep sigh.
>Seriously, this is sad, for the life of you, you can't figure out what the hell some of these pool accessories are called called.
>You know what they call the tip of a shoe string and that "Over-marrow" means the day after tomorrow and "goodbye" is short for God be with ye, but not what some pool accessories are called?
>You're going to the treebary when you get back to Ponyville.
>It's at this point that you really miss Google.
>"I'm glad to see you two made it here in a timely fashion. Shall we get started?"
"Yes your majesty, right away."
>Celestia squees and claps her hooves in praise.
>Awww, how cute.
>You walk over to her and crack your knuckles.
>Time to put in some handy work.

>>8461262
>She gets up and makes some room for you.
>You have a seat and Celestia rests her head on your lap looking directly at you with her belly up.
>Now for the belly rub, you start of gently rub her warm fuzzy belly.
>From the deep sigh she lets out, you can tell she really appreciates it.
>Damn ponies, what's so great about a belly rub?
>"Thank you so much Anon, you have no idea how long I've waited for a belly rub, so much stress these days ya know?
"Like what?"
>"Well, we have some more guests coming to the castle later on."
"Oh really? Who?"
>"Well, for one Vinyl Scratch is going to be here soon, Luna loves her music and requested that she perform at the castle."
"Niggawat?"
>Okay you didn't actually say that it was more like....
"OH MY GOD! Are you serious?! I love her!"
>Celestia jolted slightly from your sudden reaction.
>Fluttershy takes her cool shades off and give you a glare."U Wot M8?" She said.
>Instantly, you quiet down and go back to rubbing Celestia's belly.
>Fluttershy is the jealous type, you forgotten that.
>For the sake of Vinyl, you'll try and keep yourself from praising her.
>Fluttershy still has that towel with her.
>And you'd hate to see your music idol suddenly disappear.
>Flutershy don't play no games...except the fetish guessing one.
>Well, it's not a game to you.
"Flutters, keep your cool, I meant that I'm a fan is all."
>"That's what I thought sweetie, you're mine anyways."
"How about you keep calm and dream on."
>"Dreams come true ya know hun."
>Celestia chuckles, "Oh you two are the perfect couple."

>>8461274

"Celly, with all due respect, me and Flutters are just friends."
>"AHEM! Just friends? Come on Anon, we're a bit closer than just being friends."
"Okay, we're best friends."
>"That's better."
>You go back to rubbing Celestia's belly and occasionally scratching behind her ear with your other hand.
>"MMmmm, that's the spot, I'm sorry to inform you, but the separate beds request you had can't be met, there are far too many guests that will be arriving."
"Well...fuck."
>Fluttershy lifts her glasses again and gives you a glare.
>"Princess, I would like to apologize about Anon's language on his behalf, please don't exile him."
>Celestia just uses a shooing hoof motion as she enjoys her attention "What? yeah yeah I got it, don't exile Anon, I wouldn't dream of it. Anon, don't give me a reason to okay? I don't mind the language Fluttershy, no worries dear."
>She sighs in relief. "Thank you, I can't imagine what life will be like without him."
>"Hear that Anon? She can't imagine life without you."
>You roll your eyes in annoyance.
"Mhm."

>>8461297

>For once you'd like the conversation to not steer towards you and Fluttershy. Apparently, the "should be" couple of the century.
>Can't they talk about waffles or something?
>Wait, duh Anon, just talk about waffles. It could work.
"Waffles are so awesome."
>"Oh hey speaking of waffles, me and Luna had some yesterday with peach honey, it's pretty good. You and Fluttershy should try it someday."
>Welp, that almost worked.
>Then again that actually sounds good, just as long as blue strawberries aren't in the mix.
>You're steering clear from those.
>Yes you have yet to try them, but if having them is going to result into horse fuckery, you can miss out on blue strawberries.
>Besides, who needs blue strawberries when you have peach honey?
"That actually sounds pretty good Celly, I'll be sure to try that when me and Flutters get back.
>"Oh hey hun, we should try a drizzling some on cinnamon toast." Fluttershy said.
"I was just thinking that the other day when I was giving you a belly rub!"
>"NO WAY!"
"Indeed, way Flutters."
>"We're trying that when we get back."
"But the diet though...."
>"I'll make an exception again."
>Celestia raises and eye brow."Again? Anon what happened?"

>>8461314

"Alright, so a few days ago, after Fluttershy had the NERVE to put me on this health diet and moved in..."
>"Hey, I had to sweetie, you was going a bit overboard with Rarity's crazy drinks and junk food. What did you expect?"
>"Hold a moment Anon."
"Yes Celly?"
>"What made you agree to go along with her moving in and putting you on a diet?"
"The Stare."
>"Oh you've seen it?"
"Yes, it's spine chilling. I hate The Stare."
>"I only use it sparingly when it's needed. I don't abuse it, I am the Element of Kindness after all."
"Fuck that stare."
>"Love you too, Anon."
>"We're getting off track, now what happened?"
"Okay, so, I one night, my Great and Powerful sweet tooth demanded something sweet..."
>"Mhm?"
"It was about three in the morning so I made my way to the kitchen to make cinnamon toast, however at the time she was sleeping on the couch in the living room which basically is next to the kitchen. So I had to make sure she was asleep."
>"So, how'd did you make sure she was asleep?"
"....I...kinda asked her if she wanted to do it as loudly as I can."
>"AHA! I KNEW IT!! So you really did ask me and you already know the answer to that question." She lifts up her cool shades and gives you a seductive wink.
"Flutters, go back to relaxing."
>She blows you a kiss and goes back to relaxing, sighing deeply.

>>8461332

>"That's an odd way of doing that." Celestia said.
"With Fluttershy, there's never a normal way of doing things."
>"That's true, never a normal day for either of us."
"So anyway, basically I got caught in middle of taking the first bite of cinnamon toast, she told me to hand it over. I bargained that I'll let her have 2 pieces of the toast a belly rub and let her sleep on my bedroom floor with my dirty laundry just for me to have 2 pieces myself, only to end up with one piece of toast."
>"Wow, you're right, never a dull moment."
>"Yup, that's my Anon."
"How'd you know I was up anyway Flutters?"
>"That cinnamon toast smell of course, you know how much I love cinnamon toast."
>Oh yeah, she does love cinnamon toast.
>Suddenly, you see a servant walk into the pool area and toward you and the belly rubbed royalty that's laying her head in your lap.
>She stops in front of Sunny D Celly.
>The servant bows before speaking."Your majesty."
>"Yes? What brings you here?"
>"I hear to inform you a guest has arrived."
>"Oh? Who?"

>>8461347

>"She goes by Vinyl Scratch."
"OH MY GOD. She's here?!"
>All eye brows and suspicious looks are being faced in your direction.
"Slow deep breathes Anon, calm down."
>Get a hold of yourself man!
>Mental Appleslap
>You've met her once before, this shouldn't be happening.
>"I've already got her belongings delivered to her room, your majesty."
>"Excellent. Thank you."
>The servant bows and walks away.
>"Alright Anon, let it out. We know you're containing excitement." Celestia said with a chuckle.
"Nah, I'm good."
>Fluttershy lifts her cool shades for the hundredth time today and glares are you.
>"Anon? Are you su-"
"OH.MY.GOD. YES!"
>Apparently you still had some leftover excitement
>This isn't the proudest moment of your life.
>Suddenly, you hear. "Alright who's screaming like a little school filly? Sounds like that little bitch Anon."
>You look toward the direction of the voice and see Vinyl Scratch with her purple shades and a grin on her face.
>She trots over in a cool and calm manner with that zen like vibe.
>Finally she makes her way to you.
>"My entity from a different reality!"
"Mothafukin' Versus Mode."
>"What's good man?"
>She raises her hoof.
>Aww yeah.
>brohoof.jpg
"All is good Vinyl, all is good..."
>Today was a rough start and it's only getting better.

End of Part 11
I hope you all enjoyed
Thoughts? Comments? Concerns? Complaints?

>>8461376
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>>8461407

Worth the wait. Only complaint is that there isn't more.

>>8461376
Hmm... Fluttershy is a bit brash, not like her usual stuttering n' shit.

I like it so far, keep up the good work, Jc.

Late threadly reminder that MrYomus is missed deeply and that I wish him the best of luck on his endeavors wherever they may lead him.

>>8461487
Thank you good sir.
>>8461631
I'll be sure to fix that in the next part.
Thank you.

I'll be around a bit more to answer or explain anything if need be.

>>8461487
>worth the weight
http://knowyourmeme.com/videos/56537-gabe-newell

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>>8461376
>"Alright who's screaming like a little school filly? Sounds like that little bitch Anon."
I laughed hard.
I'm really liking where this story is heading. For once Anon isn't bitching or whining about fluttershy fetish guessing to others. Well, not that much, but great to see Anon to go though along with fluttershy. Brings a comedy mood and serious story telling at the same time. Sure fluttershy is acting like... not herself that much, question; is she in her estrus or high with some drugs she took?
I like Anon's personally in this story, and WHY DIDN'T YOU WRITE MOAR?

>>8462122
The fuck did I just watch?
Shit and got dubs, you win this time anon

>>8462343
Thank you.
I'll be sure to explain her behavior in the next part.
I was honestly debating whether or not, I should have written more. I usually write even less than this so I thought it would be a good place to end this part.
I'll be sure to write more next time

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>>8462654
We're be waiting, lurking for the next update. Have a Luna

>>8462818
Thank you Anon.
Saving that.

Later on this week I should have my other stories written and ready to post. HOPEFULLY.
I'll be around for about another 2 hours before I crash for the night.

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>>8462968
>Update soon

I'm not dead
Just in poor health

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>>8463261
Ah there you are, what happened to you?

DORKS!