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04/24/12(Tue)17:49 No.1510843
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First of all, thanks for those cock guzzling, vagina flying lovely lines. Fuck, finally a faggot who understand how goddamned bloody lines are supposed to work. Fuck. (I'm having an orgasm over the tail; please fuck me hard!)
Anyway, your bodies are rather inconsistent and, try using base constructions (see image). The main problems are with the neck, legs, wings and body. If you're too much of a faggot to use circles [fuck you Rose], try drawing a line from the butt to the belly, or the other way around, both in a single stroke. This way you don't lose consistency, which is nice because you want a certain mathematical correctness. (Hold on there cowboy, it's true that mathematical correctness can be thrown out of the window, it is best to work towards it when you're still fresh. [Fuck you Rose.] It simply looks nice (see Leonardo Da Vinci).) Your wings are nice, just a bit small. Might want to add to them later, but keep it simple for now. As for the legs, you've got the general idea down, but the attachment point needs to be smaller. The neck has a similar problem, except it is not connected correctly. It's a point, rather than a bent. The snout directly connects with the neck - or at least in the show. Again, see image. Continued... |
