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12/21/11(Wed)21:36 No.32558361>>32558258 I think you're selling yourself short, your descriptions, mood, setting, etc aren't in any way bad. Dialogue is important, anyway, if something wants to have a deeper story than "Hey she's actually loved you ALL ALONG, you don't need to put any effort into this romance at all!", though admittedly that story works quite well for vapid waifufiction, it'd be nice to be able to make people speak without sounding like retarded children. |