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12/14/11(Wed)00:12 No.32310964In all seriousness, I read the first couple chapters, went "It's alright, I guess, but I kinda skimmed some of these protracted scenes in which nothing happens."
Heard that it had a big "What the Hell Hero" moment in chapter 39, read that, got a bit annoyed by the melodramatic first-person narration and the fact that Velvet was praising Lilpip in the same breath she was chewing her out. A bit disjointed.
If I sat down with the fic, I'd probably really enjoy it, but from what I read there is absolutely no way that it lives up to the massive amounts of hype, which I guess isn't necessarily the story's fault so much as it is the fans'. |