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No. 31228486 Soarin': The first thing I notice is that we're nearly looking at his body dead on, but we essentially see his face in profile. I wouldn't suggest changing the entire face, but the entire image is flattened because of the head angle. We see a very smooth line from the end of his nose up to his hair line. I would expect to see a bit of a bump at least around the brow line, to indicate that there is some face over there even though we can't see it. Some sort of variation in that incredibly straight line, at least. There's also his hair. It kind of strikes me as kind of an old bouffant sort of hair style. Lots of hair spray holding it perfectly in place. I would think the wind from flying would mess it up and send it to pieces – some covering bits of his face and flying this way and that. Not one uniform, solid piece of hair. 
