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09/07/11(Wed)02:30 No.29445203>>29444405
>Baby Carrot
>"Angel was still after here"
VINTAGE OLD-SKOOL RS PROOFREADING ALL UP IN THIS CRIB HEY HO HEY HO WICKA-WICKA-WICKA
>Spike x CMCs
>And this just means that I’m getting ready to turn into a mare.
Yes this is totally something Scootaloo would say. There is nothing awkward about this sentence whatsoever.
>Ah’m telling you girls
>Ah'm
>WRITING OUT ACCENTS
OH SHIT NIGGER WHAT ARE YOU DOING
>Snails
I'm not even going to dignify this with heckling.
>Luna's Sad Party
>“Eyup,” he said. “Well, a decorative one, of course. Ceremonial, or whatever. It’s too fragile to do any work with. You see, I was thinking about what on earth a humble earth pony such as myself could get an alicorn princess who has everything. And I started thinking about how earth ponies are real salt of the earth types. We don’t got fancy magic or make the weather or anything. But we plow the fields, and that’s special in it’s own way. So I blah blah blah"
Oh my God shut up already. For a character of very few words you just keep going on and on.
>Dazzle and Orion
This could be intere-
>Orion shoved his long, heavy cock into Dazzle and started fucking her hard right off the bat.
Wait what happened to the first half? I trust you have more sense than to start with fucking when you haven't even described the character's physical trai-
>neighing wildly
Oh I see. Passing times eight billion.
>Rutting Day
I remember reading this and having a hardy chuckle. Also, this isn't straight-up straight as much as it happens to have straight sex at certain intervals. In regards to fapping, a terrible pick.
>Girl, You'll Be a Woman Soon
This... is actually sort of okay. Not great, but not bad. C+ |
