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!!sapMkWZiqgy 09/05/11(Mon)12:49 No.29393875>>29393848 No offense to you or EQD I'm just a little fed up about something:
Whoever did this review sounds like a giant tool. He comes off as an 8 year old who thinks he can write blistering and nonconstructive criticism just like a reality TV panel; but in all reality he is only enforcing the dichotomy that fanfiction is different from literature.
I don't know what kind of garbage stories this guy has been reading but it's clearly turning him into a pompous asshole. Not only has shown how far he's closed his mind to my story, but he goes on to pick it apart piece by piece like those two chapters were the whole story. He doesn't think "Maybe there is a reason the characters are acting this way" or "There is going to be 20 chapters, of course all this "drama" will be explained". Why would he think those things? It would just make too much sense!
You know, who is this guy to say what fits and what doesn't fit in MY story? He doesn't know the story, he doesn't know what I have planned and he just sounds like an all around moron. Did you give him this position just so he would feel important? Because he doesn't know jack about literature; he can't pick up on context clues, he refuses to look at the big picture. Do you keep him around because he has a pretty face?
Just, before you do anything else, tell him to stop reading my story. Being an EQD pre-read commands a certain amount of intelligence that he clearly doesn't possess, and if he does, he sure isn't showing it. Just pass my story onto someone more competent and capable of looking at the big picture.
I will be patiently waiting for that other review because I would love to have my story as a part of your site, but you guys have to realize something that I have been trying to tell you every time I submit: |