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>>28574251 FO:E about a 7. it's pretty solid structurally, but i'm really not a fan of various character interpretations, or his very strange lurching timeline, or his constant "pip's eye view" scavenging sequences. the prose and descriptive elements are very nice though.
past sins; 3/10 it's just so horribly far from the show, everything is incredibly forced and artificial, nothing really makes sense, ect ect. it gets three points for having DECENT grammar and raw writing
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