Looking for critique on a fic

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JkWZqR1qReFi3uqb5_h892jU6ZjCySA2S4RbhYG_GnU/edit?hl=en_US

>>28546482
Nice.

It's unhealthy to brush your teeth too frequently. And even then you should be paying more attention to the gums.

But you should floss and mouthwash regularly.

so, um. plush ponies?

i'm thinking of coming out to my parents and i think that might be a convenient way to ease into it

Oh, how could I say no to you, Colgate

>>28546314
Out of curiosity, where did you find this picture?

It's not on the photobucket or meetup website.

>>28546522
Same thing with showers.
You should only shower at most once a month.

>>28546527
Why does she look like she's getting off on this?

>>28546284
Seems like a neat concept.
NTSTS wins my favorite trip.

>>28546533
buying or making?

Why is the first post in every thread Twilight in a diaper?

>>28546564
buying

the creative eludes me

>>28546438
>henna
>triforce
Please tell me you shot this guy.

>>28546501
Better...
Also in the work out thread my abs burn like liquid fire...

>>28546527
dammit I was going to post that. Oh well...
>>28546570
Best and only version I like.

>>28546566
Such is the life in MLPGs

>>28546561
>click back to topic
Oh god.
I like having my dick proverbially sucked as much as the next guy, but this will only end in horror and rage.

my favorite trip is Fluffy

sorry Thistle, you're top three for sure though.

>>28546527
>In most sharks, the basihyal [tongue] is small, relatively immovable, and generally useless.

Yeah, that tongue isn't in her vagina.

my grandma is good at sewing i am trying to think of a way to force her to make me plushies but i guess i would need a pattern first

>>28546572
well... http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=250869414655#ht_500wt_1156

>>28546580
Nope.

He's one of the few that has attended all three of the PDX meetups and he's actually enjoyable to talk to.

>thread desinged to promote health and excersize
>promptly gets saged

>>28546591
It's cool. Bein on top isn't my thing.
Also, I like reading.

>>28546617
Too bad he's such a faggot, eh?

>>28546615
fuck your marker.jpg

>>28546614
>£82
People are rioting for less than that!

>>28546544
Seriously looking for an answer on this, I'm trying to get all the pics together in one place.

>>28546586
>snails
>fucked up leg
>must be SB art

oh i guess it isnt

>>28546635
>thread with no keywords that doesn't show up on the tracker
>promptly gets sages
what a cruel world!

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>>28546586
is that possible? Looks pretty weird to me

>>28546635
Nothing against fitness, but we need keywords.

>>28546645
You're a bit of an asshole. You and dinofag should get together some time.

I get that creeping feeling that these threads, diaper porn and "fuck your marker" meme is all made by the same person. Or at least 3 individuals

>>28546635
>implying many here can even do a quarter of what was on that list without passing out.

>>28546677
>get called an asshole by natahn
this day's getting brighter and brighter!

>>28546544

Just so you know Nathan, nobody likes pictures of you and your dorky friends. Thanks for giving me material for more nerd caricatures, though!

>>28546661
Do I have a reputation for messing up legs? I wasn't aware of it.

Anyway, off to work. Gonna practice some shit and draw Twilight's parents tonight.

>>28546648
I still have no idea what the fuck those guys are rioting about

maybe they're just bored

>>28546679
>hrm, these 3 memes must have been made by 3 different people!

>detective hat
>magnifying glass
>elementary!

>>28546677
>You're a bit of an asshole.
Understatement of the year

>>28546586
"I STEPPED ON GUM! I STEPPED ON GUM! OOOHOHOOO!"

>>28546690
I guffawed.

>>28546677
Maybe we should. We could go to a meetup together and beat up all the nerds.

>>28546708
i think the police shot some black gangbanger who was waving a gun around
black peeps got angry
and started looting instead of just protesting

>>28546561
Favorite: NTSTS by far
Most hated: I hate nobody
Barely seen: I haven't "barely seen" anyone

>>28546635
>boxxy is a character in past sins and the father of scootaloo


that is pretty stupid why would they use that name

>>28546648
A starving and miserable African family could receive food and simple medical care for a year on that.

>>28546701
I'm just asking because i am trying to get them all together in one place for the sake of convenience. A gallery we can link to a blog post.

>>28546718
I recall hearing that in a song...

Drawing done. I shall continue drawing in around fifteen minutes after lunch.

god fucking damn it, stop reminding me that I ran out of toothpaste yesterday OP, my breath smells like ass and I hate it

>>28546741
We gave him that name...

>>28546561
Favorite: Fluffy
Least: EX-CR
Barely seen but like: SoAshamedPony

>>28546732
i was always partial to chainsaws myself

>>28546759
Gargle 1/4 peroxide to 3/4 water. Surely you have some peroxide in your house.

>>28546760
please tell me his last name is brown

>>28546770
You can't carry a chainsaw in public.

They're not good weapons anyway.

>>28546741
We gave him the name Boxxy Brown, because he's brown and is special talent is boxes.

I never thought of him as Scootaloo's father though.

>>28546753
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SwToedwyhoE

>>28546788
It is.

>>28546212

Now I've never had a braeburn, but I'm having a hard time believing it's better than that gala I just had

>>28546800
FUCK YEAH TALLY HALL!

>>28546791
You're right. I should get my masterworks thousand fold katana.

>>28546788
Lol.

>>28546787
yeah, put peroxide in your mouth, that'll be fun

>>28546791
>They're not good weapons anyway.
it's not like we're dealing with combat ready opponents here

>>28546793
My personal fanon was that he was Derpy's dad and boss and Dinky's grandfather.

>>28546817
People mouthwash with it all the time. Educate yo'self, foo.

>>28546817
There's nothing wrong with it. It just tastes bad.

>Check Fur Affinity for the first time in months
>Over 1,800 "new" images and flashes
>Only save this one
Feels good man.

>>28546818
The real reason that the Japanese never attacked the Bronies; If they were to invade there would be a gun under every fedora.

>>28546822
He was an Abusive father and fucked up Derpy's eyes and brain one night after too much to drink?

>>28546807
Braeburns have sort of an orange undertone to them, with a hint of peach.

>>28546818
Who drew that Gummy?

>>28546852
>implying bronies can shoot straight with derpy eyes.

>>28546855
Nope, just a swell guy whose daughter has an unfortunate condition.

>>28546845
>Furaffinity

I am so sorry.

>>28546845
>checking furaffinity at all

>>28546811
I just noticed it wasn't the prolonged intro.

oh well.

>>28546818
You've never used a chainsaw, have you?

They kick back when they hit something hard. They're also horribly balanced. You're just as likely to injure yourself as you are them.

nathan i got the picture from the site you posted

>those prices goddamn

if this is a "special" i would hate to see their normal price

>>28546561
Not counting namefags:
Favorite - RS or Faceless
Least - Slywit or Nanaki
Barely seen but like - 0r0...I miss when he would post here

>>28546885
Hey 8li9ht posted something today I regret nothing.

>>28546859
looks like Mochas' style.

>>28546818
Gummy is so chill because he's absolutely confident he could fuck up anything's shit. That's why ponyville doesn't have any sort of guard - because with gummy around, they dojn't need one.

>>28546889
I take it you are a fan of Tally Hall then, Faceless?

>>28546561
I don't really have any favorites, all the ones I REALLY liked have either left or sunk back to average.

I really don't like >>28546580 though.

>>28546907
The special is that you get a free toy with each meal.

Fans would pay any price for a simple cheeseburger to get a free toy.

>>28546897
>You've never used a chainsaw, have you?
actually i have
the key is to push into it, but not too much or you'll bind the blade. electrics are great since they have very constant torque
using it as a sword however will result in failure.

>>28546931
That's a shame, a lot of us really don't like you

Hey guys fluffly post that new comic yesterday?

>>28546897
This. Chainsaws are actually not fun to use at all.

If I were going to utilize a tool in that class as a weapon, I'd use an arc welder, with the gas tank strapped to my back. I fuckin love using arc welders.

>>28546907
>autism special

>>28546907
Looks like an actual restaurant. I take it you've never eaten at a Red Robin or similar burger joint?

>>28546950
Just bring a hammer or something if you're not a bad enough dude to smash bronies with your fists.

I'll bring some horse shoes and nails.

>>28546960
That took more posts to surface than I thought it would.

favorite: Roogna!
Oh hey looks whos here!

why does everyone look so sad in this picture

>>28546907
It's a restaurant in the middle of Downtown. Of course it's a little pricy.

At least the food tasted good, but I think my money would have been better spent just getting a shake there and taking home a box of donuts from Voodoo Donuts.

The most popular donut they make is a Bacon Maple Bar. It is a maple bar. With BACON on it. And it's amazing.

>>28546929
I listened to them alot from about a year or so ago.

also I found the song which had the gum part
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGQZItOMz6k&feature=relmfu

They're pretty good, nice subliminal messages and songs that make you think, really THINK about what it means (Ruler of Everything) and so on so on.

>>28546908
What about Bartender Brony? I like that he recognizes that when he doesn't need to use his trip, he doesn't.

>>28546971
Oh oh! Have a boxing glove with a horse shoe sewn into the glove.

>>28546956
I've gathered as much.

>>28546960
I saw that too.

>>28546982
if they're anything like me it's because they get slightly depressed everytime they see a picture of Fluttershy because they realize that they can't hug her

If ponies are herbivores how come their faces are flat and their eyes face forwards?

Wouldn't that make them carnivorous predators?

>>28546982
That was early on in the meetup during the awkward introduction phase.

Or everybody was just watching the Fluttershy being drawn.

>>28546959
When did you use an arc welder?

>>28546982
They're all disapointed at the way the picture came out.

>>28546971
>I'll bring some horse shoes and nails.
what a horribly gruesome way to kill a man
i like it

>>28546983
>bacon donut

you are an obese american am i right

>not using brass knuckles to punch people out at brony meetups
>2011

>>28546985
I was pretty lost in The Ruler of Everything. Have you gotten the new album?

>favorite trip
I'm gonna have to go with NTSTS since he also likes Applejack.

>most hated trip
I was gonna say Beedrill now that Faceless isn't a cancer, but then Nathan started posting...

>trip you've barely seen but you like
┐('～`；)┌

>>28547032
Can I join this lemon party? I'll beat people down with my 12 sided diamond dildo!

>>28546982
>Pomf

Oh lawdy

>>28547040
>Ruining your fist-weapons with fancy addons

>>28547023
I used to work as a locksmith. It was the best way of cutting off industrial locks.

>>28547040
Nigga you gon drink that sprite?!

>>28547032
Who said anything about killing them? I figured we'd just rough 'em up, shoe 'em, and make them walk home.

Once they get shoed I bet they'd never want to see another horse again, marshmallow or not.

My favorite tripsavior is RoastedBread. He has saved the day multiple times from agents of the gay agenda.

So there's a vector of the Comic Con poster now.

No Nyx isn't fucking in it, thank god.

http://ponycomicconposter.deviantart.com/art/16k-Pony-Con-Poster-w-logos-251869643

too big to upload, go figure

>>28547078
wise council
you're a pretty cool guy, ammonium nitrate

>>28547048
To be honest I kind of stopped listening to them a while ago as well, I just noticed their new album. will listen to it once I've gone through Ruler of Everything again. such a nice song about how Time rules all.

>>28547016
Initially, the forward eyes were a pegasus-only trait. However, with the advent of ranged warfare, depth perception became equally important to the survival of the earth and unicorn ponies.
This is why Celestia, Luna and Zecora, who aren't descended from pegasus ponies, all have their eyes on the sides of their heads.

I'd like to bring soem of my weapons I've got around the house. I've got a fiberglass handled axe, a spear, a cavalry saber, and a .38

>>28547037
Why don't I just link you their menu.

They have a lot of weird and interesting items.

http://voodoodoughnut.com/menu.php

>>28547086
>two OCs in the balloon

>>28547086
Again I ask: who the fuck is Nyx?

>>28547040
>Not bringing concealed handguns to brony meet ups.

I'm pretty sure if we all ended up in a single room the bloodshed would be delicious.

when you see it

>>28547086
>furfag OCs in the balloon

It's ruined.

>>28547093

>>28547127
It'd turn into an orgy within minutes

>>28547126
HERE WE GO

>>28547095
The new album is pretty nice IMHO.

>>28547086
>vector
>jpg

>>28547129
The guy in the white shirt looks pretty 'ard.

>tries to hide face from camera

>>28547126
Oh god damnit. This thread was going so well too.

>>28547129
>fat
>cargo shorts
>fedora

Yep, sure is sonic fandom around here.

>>28547163
The full thing is 30,000px across

>>28547171
>that ponytail

>>28547126
Fanfiction Character. Nothing more or less than that.

>>28547129
Why was it their first reaction upon meeting up to immediately start taking a shitton of pictures?

>>28547126
this
>the past sins shitstorm begins and ends with this psot, by the way

>>28547134
I'm not seeing any OCs

new game is to count the fedoras and cargo pants at brony meetups

>>28547129
What? The mandatory fedora guy?

>>28546982
Because we are all addicted and seriously just want to stop liking this show because
1. The fanbase is horrible
2. Season 2 likely won't be good
3. Its an addiction

That's why they're sad.

>>28547199
In the balloon in the full version.

>>28547191
I bet he calls it a brony-tail

>>28547199
Zoom in on it.

i dont understand this moonspeak but i am a little worried about that website at the top.

>>28547198
dude, get with the times, we have the finished version now, including a 'wtf is nyx' subsection.

>>28547171
Actually, he was trying to keep the sun off of him.

I'm the guy holding the umbrella, btw.

>>28547119

Im deleting this fucking shit right now, thank you sir.

>>28547212
fucking disgusting

>>28547157
I like the beat of '&'

>>28547212
I only see one.
And..
Is that carrot top?

>>28547257
Mah nigga.

FFFFFFFFFUCK Them fedora wearing faggots, there's a reason people don't wear them and that's because nobody in this time and age can wear one and not look like a hipster douche.

>>28547277
IT FUCKING IS.

>>28547277
Cocolli

http://cocolli.deviantart.com/

>>28547283
Fedoras are only acceptable when worn with a suit and when not bought at Walmart.

TO WHOEVER ANONYMOUS USER 6 WAS

I changed the scene where Luna first puts on the socks: is it better now?

someone said a few threads ago that there wasn't any ApplejackxBloomberg

>>28547283
>Hipster
I don't think you know what that word means.
Only unwashed aspies wear fedoras

>>28547312
There was AJxBloomberg in the show

it's canon

>>28547086
OCs in the balloon you say? let's see here
ZOOM

>>28547134

Yep, I deleted the vector after noticing that. Those were not the ponies in the balloon, fuck that.

>>28547283
What about top hats?
I wore a top hat once.

>>28547277
The pony or the Comedian?

>>28547312
Yeah, someone needs to get on that

>pony party

reminds me of that guide to pony parties. some post it.

>>28547236
"Friendship is magic" in polish I presume.

And as for the site, well...
>Polfurs - Polska grupa Furry - Furries in Poland

>>28547313
Only latinos can wear fedoras with a zoot suit and pull it off.

>>28547327
not close enough, ZOOM AGAIN

>>28547305
Looks much better now, good jorb.

>>28547328
they couldn't possibly recreate the ponies in the balloon, this isn't CSI
They had a choice between making something up and leaving the balloon empty, basically

>>28547313
I hate hipsters.

>>28547332
Only if you're wearing an appropriate suit and have a magic wand.

>>28547350

>>28547327
Enhance!

>>28547343
at first i didnt realize what this was. then i shit my pants.

>>28547343
I can only imagine how much fun the staff of that place had making fun of them in the kitchen.

>>28547313
If you're saying that there aren't people who "ironically" wear fedoras, you got another thing coming.

>>28547367
it's coming into focus now...

http://skaijo.deviantart.com/art/Friendship-Is-Magic-Bitch-251799262

>>28547363
I was wearing the appropriate suit, but I didn't have a magic wand. I did have a bunny, though. Does that count?

>>28547387
They probably shit in the food.

>>28547367
I still see twillight and rarity in that thing.

>>28547391
Clarify Picture!

>>28547236
It's a polish furry group.

>>28547341
Someone requested this once.

>>28547404
How can you summon the bunny without the wand?

I'll have to give you a pass though.

>>28547391
I'm getting ready.

>>28547343
That is one overpriced menu

>>28547327

We know who the ponies in the balloon were, per the guy who made the poster. They weren't fucking OCs, they were background ponies. Specifically, the pink pony with cherries for a cutie mark (wearing a set of goggles), and one of the white-ish photographer ponies from Green Isn't Your Color (the little one with the funny hat).

Pic related, this is one of the two in the balloon.

>>28547387
The kitchen was in full view of the section of the restaurant we were in, with a bar counter separating them. With them in ear shot, I doubt they wanted to cause a disturbance.

They even invited us back for next time.

>>28547086
A fifty-one megabyte picture? That is fucking massive. 30,000 pixel vector, wow.

>>28547343
>>28547343
This is all wrong.

All food at a pony party should be fruits, vegetables, salads and most importantly, SWEETS, because ponies love sweets.

Not to mention, I'm sure some of the fans could use better nourishment like fruits/vegs.

>>28547390
Living is ironic because we're all going to die anyway. We're all hipsters.

>>28547391

This is the real poster retard...

>>28547435
Someone chopped down bloomberg.

Applejack is a necrophiliac now.

>>28547433
Like I said, it was downtown. Food is always more expensive downtown.

>>28547391
AND IT WAS ZOIDBERG AND JESUS ALL ALONG!

>>28547391
You are zooming the normal poster, not the furfag OC vector.

>>28547450
>They even invited us back for next time.
No shit, you paid them didn't you?

protip: at brony meetups be sure to include your OC name or tripcode on your nametag so everyone knows you are a massive faggot!

>>28547455
How long before a youtube video of a pony meetup where they're all munching on grass and hay?

>>28547474
$10 for a damn cheeseburger, fries, and a pop.

Those burgers better be amazing/big.

>>28547455
I would happily feed pinkie a bag of M&Ms, one by one
using my tounge

>>28547478
HOOOOLYYYYY SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT

>>28547474
was the food even good?

>>28547478

>>28547509
wasn't it in New York
things are expensive there

>>28547512
Why not go the extra mile and chew them prior to emptying your contents into her gullet.

>>28547496
Aside from ordering food off the menu? Not a dime.

The only cost was the price whatever people ate.

>>28547512
She prefers skittles.

>>28547478
hot damn. i must've got the retarded ones, then

>mfw I'm downloading the 51MB vector
>mfw I have ridiculously slow internet here
>and it's going to take 20 minutes

>>28547501
We have the same name and both like Pinkie Pie.
He can't be THAT bad.

>inb4 im proved wrong

>>28547509
>>28547533
The fries were okay but the burgers and shakes were damn good.

>>28547539
Downtown Portland.

>>28547391
ENHANCE!
oh
oh dear

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gg-oxLOZBhk
the azn market

>>28547567
Enjoy your OC

>mfw it's yet again far too late to get enough sleep and i'm not even remotely tired

every damn time

ponies, y u do dis

>>28547544
well then she wouldn't get the pleasure of biting into them, I couldn't take that away from her

>>28547570
He's at a brony meetup.
Come on, man. You already had the proof.

>>28547563
Yea you did.
>>28547546
My point. You guys bought food, of course they're going to want you to come back. That doesn't mean they like you.

>>28547567
Reported.

Delivering on a fapfic request. The six mares are in heat, but they can't find adequate males in Ponyville. So they all go to Manehattan to get laid.

Fun Bus to Manehattan:

It's a really long story. I know a lot of people weren't interested in all of these different stories. So I edited out the sections of each character, and compiled them in their own gdocs. This way you can read them individually if you want to, minus the prologue and conclusion. There's still some minor editing to be done, but we'll get it sorted out eventually.

Twilight's Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Vfw7rwGmL2wIKiNZiwaFgFr4IJ0J2vH5kFm6j4v2ScQ/edit?hl=en_US

Pinkie Pie's Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RbwRGcJpXG7wUA1Fr1zHbR3my26t0gDjxzuS1kvaL00/edit?hl=en_US

Applejack's Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14G5JtEG5KDn0Nc-dhoVtdMr0GKXoIX1xj0HLUwQohik/edit?hl=en_US

Rainbow Dash's Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KoguudsTVBD0WmEwt6uCGNcLKLp1Fc_YezU0Fd4b2VQ/edit?hl=en_US

Fluttershy's Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FxxfJXA6sY9WOJDgRNNzaHXFcM9xXB1XvUfV19IXbxg/edit?hl=en_US

Rarity's Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19mk9yWH_YGw3qMgT1bUScZ-qQ9aib1kmuKT7B0qwA18/edit?hl=en_US

>>28547614
Reported.

>>28547567

>yfw you see the two shitty self inserts in the ballon.

>>28547600
Because you can't quit that of which is part of yourself

>>28547583
>peers in to look . . .
DINO FAAAAAAG!

>>28547634
>self inserts in the balloon
WHAT THE DICK COCK FUCK ASS
I SPENT THE LAST HALF HOUR DOWNLOADING THIS SHITTY ASS POSTER
FUCK

>>28547593
>>Still more accurate than fox
HaHa...

>>28547212
check that derpy cosplay!

>>28547628
Finally!!!

>>28547634

>mfw

>>28547649
guess i got a BONE to pick with faust!

>>28547628
wow, you did end up spitting it up

>>28547648
Derpy is one sexy mare. She can deliver my mail ANYTIME.

>>28547593
fucking awesome! this is the best coverage we could have possibly gotten

>>28547628
neat thanks RS

>>28547668
>Derpy cosplay

What?

>>28547678
I did both. Splitting it up was a matter of cutting and pasting.

>>28547567
Seriously, what's the point of re-vectoring the entire image only to release it rasterized again?

>>28547694
The mailman

Anyone have some pictures of Lil Pip?

>>28547512
"I have an even better idea. You open YOUR mouth and put a few M&M's in there and I'll get them out of there with my tongue."

>>28547628

I can now die happy

What the fuuuuuuuuuck-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gg-oxLOZBhk

>download poster
>see this
>delete forever

>>28547726
That nigger that puts whistles in car tail pipes?

>>28547700
So you have the whole thing as one somewhere? these can be read in any order?

>>28547628
...why must you do this to pinkie pie.

wait
did someone say meetups
because i thought i heard someone say meetups

>>28547711
I'm having a hard time finding this mailman.

Point him out? I swear to go if he's somewhere obvious...

>>28547694
Nathan slooooooooow

>>28547748
Wat.

>>28547745
I vote we get Fluffy to put in the proper ponies.

>>28547745

>>28547745

We know that feel bro.

>>28547730
But then they'll melt before you even get them!

>>28547711
You sly anon . . .

>>28547745

>OC's

>>28547583

We need to go deeper.

>>28547759
Fuck, nm I see him.

Not a part of our group though. I thought that was a baby carriage he was walking at first.

>>28547745
I'm out. Fuck this gay earth.

>>28547759

>>28547745
Eh, it shouldn't be too hard to edit out. The rest of the image looks okay though.

>>28547628
>Reading the Rarity story
>Laughing too hard to fap properly

Goddamn it RS, you're supposed to be setting a sexy tone not a comedy. But i enjoyed it anyway.

>>28547779
>>28547745
Wow, one seriously clever troll, whoever uploaded the image.

>>28547762
Nevermind, I was thinking of Bubb Rubb and lil sis.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_JtoW7GrdY
I'm dumb.

>>28547745

>>28547745
>>28547745
>>28547745
I thought you guys were lying and bitching about two barely visible ponies

I am now saddened.

Someone find out who those OCs are, I need someone to rage at.

>>28547809
I found him. Didn't see the postal service logo on what looked like a baby carriage.

god i love this game

...I'm gonna go outside and smoke a cigarette while I try to figure out how to kill Ponychan with my mind.

This poster is NOT the one Ponychan was making.

http://www.ponychan.net/chan/art/res/27126.html
Read the last few posts toward the bottom.

Ponychan version will NOT have OCs.

>>28547849

>>28547849
How the fuck did you get that skin and hair?

>>28547745
S-someone ho-hold me.
I dont t-think i can make it with a-all this rage.

>>28547772
"Shh shhh... Just do it..."

So anyone doing a real vector of the poster minus the rasterization and shitty OCs? Guess we have to go back to waiting

>>28547628
Not that you usually seem interested in feedback, RS, but the stories read well, as is usual. I wonder if you'll get people upset with the fact that you spent more time on the setup than the actual fucking (at least in the two pieces I read)...

What's next on the docket?

>>28546865
>not commenting on the douchey fedora line

>>28547818

Dude im only reading the Twilight chapter and is a fucking biology lesson.

>>28547821
I need one of these.

I'm confused, what's going on in this thread?

>>28547888
Fluffy is doing one unless Ponychans doesn't have any OC's

>>28547913
Same thing every day.

Nothing.

>>28547874
>>28547832
I wish I thought of this now. This troll hit a freaking jackpot.

>>28547888
http://www.ponychan.net/chan/art/res/27126.html
Ponychan's been working on it for a while now and their version won't have OCs.

I think I also heard Fluffy was making one.

>>28547913
Pinkie is working to give a whyboner, and usual asshattery.

>>28547885
Fiiine, but don't blame me if it's all sticky and gooey and goes everywhere

>>28547888
Nope.

Enjoy the same retards shouting "HURR OCS MLP IS FUCKING RUINED" and the "lol i am so funneh zoidberg and t-rex XD" faggots.

>>28547865

>Ponychan saving the day

Wow this is new.

When you see it

Pictures of LittlePip?

guys, what are some good ask blogs to follow?

and i mean actually good/funny ones, not the shitty roleplay blogs where all they do is chat with other ask blogs.
preferably one with drawings.

>>28547965
http://askpuppetponies.tumblr.com/

>>28547745

Wait, somebody changed the ponies inside that balloon

As shown here, in the oldest scan of the thing I have on my drive

who the fuck would want to change a comic con poster to have their shitty OCs in it

oh wait, i forgot about some aspects of this fandom

>>28547832
Guy in DeviantArt is denying that they're OCs in the comments, so probably his own.

>>28547963
I need some over here.

>>28547965
I'm pretty sure Faceless and several other regulars would recommend http://askberrypnuch.tumblr.com/

>>28547924
>>28547939

I see, I'll just resume posting the ponies then

>>28547992
the other berry punch tumblr is also good
as is the pinkamena dianne pie one railgunner is doing, and the mayor mare one

>>28547963
Why would we want pictures of that murderous thug? She's like the Postal Dude, only she pops pills and is gay.

>>28547911
Pinkie's is so funny

>>28546859
No idea but have this

>>28547965
AskTwilight is pretty great.

I really like the art style.

http://asktwilight.tumblr.com/

>>28547946

>nope
>two other versions being cited previous to your post

l o l.

Good to know, I can wait.

>>28547965

askmayormare.tumblr.

it's run by dovne, he makes really good and hot clop materiel.

>>28547955
While there is stupid drama over there in certain boards, I've also had better discussions about the show/ possibilities for season 2 with some of it's posters than anything in /co/'s generals, not to mention the one guy i added to MSN from here that hates that site pretty much only likes the show for shipping, whereas the three I've added from there apparently actually like the show, don't make OCs, and the one's APPARENTLY even a parent with children that like the show.

But don't take my word for it, let's just go rage at the younger posters making OCs and being dumb.

>>28547992
Actually, after reading it and finding this, I recommend it as well.

>>28547905
Thanks, man.

Next up is "Cheer and Kindness at Fluttershy's Cottage." Cheerilee goes to Fluttershy's house, gets drugged up, then Fluttershy has consensual sex with her while she's totally inebriated.

Then it's a sexy sequel to this old story about an aging Spike and Princess Twilight

http://ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=166

Using this rage to whore my posters. I got 6 left before I can mailing again or something. Hit me up if you're interested.

>>28547943
*Slurp*"That's... what I'm hoping for..."

>>28547986
Is the story her description is never mentioned, she's to be an empty palette like the game, but johnjoseco seems to have set the standard

the rusted chains chains of prison moons are shattered by the sun~
I walk a road, horizons change, the tournament's begun~
The purple pipe plays his tune, the choir softly sings~
Three lullabies in an ancient tongue, for the court of the crimson kiiiiiiiiiiiing~

>>28547980
yeah, it's hard to tell, but it looks like Twilight and Spike in the balloon. So, guy on deviantart being a huge asshat by inserting shitty OC's? Confirmed.

>>28548050
I've had lots of nice discussions on Ponychan. There's lots of immaturity and drama present on /oat/, but /dis/ and /pony/ are usually quite nice. /chat/ is also all right.

Stop! It's hammer time

>>28547939

>>28548094
>Zecora's Voice
>Eargasm

>>28548065
ebay not working out eh?

>>28548092
What.

>>28548122
I remember a Pokemon version of this.

guys help i cant decide what story i want to fap to first

>>28548100

They are two of the background ponies according to the guy who made the fucking poster. One of which we see in the show very frequently.

>>28548112
I only go there for pic's
that and gilda

>>28548100
In the words of Sarge from Red vs. Blue:

Stop the fucking presses.

>>28548085
Well you'll have to take a bath afterwards, then, can't go out with your mouth all covered in chocolate, now can you?

>>28548112
Too bad both the creative boards are taken up by original character discussion and Past Sins circlejerk.

Also featuring about five posts per hour.

>>28548148
Never did eBay.

>>28548159
an anon was finding himself attracted to Reshiram. I remember that thread

>>28548159
I Remember it exactly. It was about this guy who was attracted to reshiram. Then I joined in
I miss being aggron

>>28548169
Dont you ever mention my waifu and ponychan in the same sentence.

>>28548176
"Oh? You won't help clean little me up? You could lick up whatever gets on my pert squishy body... I might even... accidentally... drop some on my thighs..."

>>28548228
We have something in common good sir. She is my secret waifu.

I AM THE GOD OF HELLFIRE AND I BRING YOU

>>28548196
Yeah, FiMchan is much better for art and fiction.

>>28548232
While I wouldn't disagree with that scenario, it's not completely hygienic, I'd still recommend a bath afterwards. I could help there, too, if you want

>>28548050
Wow, a real live parent...you don't say.

>>28548265

HI GOD OF HELLFIRE

>>28547975
oh god

>>28547992
THAT ONE yes i've been looking for it i just couldn't misspell the name properly

>>28548021
yeah i already follow that one, love it

>>28548037
is this... Hops' art? so it's a softcore ponyporn blog, then

>>28548268
Except in that instance replace five posts per hour with five posts per day.

Maybe there's nowhere to discuss creative original content after all.

I guess I should just go join the Nyxzombies...

Will someone make Faceless go away? ...or at least make him take his medicine.

>>28547965
Whoever's doing this stuff on Pinkie's is great.

Then again, I'm biased for pinkie

>>28548265
Is the burning desire turning you to sin?

>>28548269
"Dealio! Now open your mouth, these M&M won't just walk into your mouth for me to lap and slurp at you know!"

>>28548009
can you link me to the mayor mare one the one i found (http://askmayor-mare.tumblr.com/) is shit and he doesn`t even draw

>>28548228
>>28548261
Now we just need Pacce to get in here

>>28548274
There's tons of parents there. It used to be mostly 20- and 30-somethings.

Then summer hit, kids got out of school, and the boards were hit by a wave of teenagers who are in it because "ponies are cool and popular on the internet."

Like Kleme. Probably my least favorite poster there.

>>28548323

filter, it works for everyone else

>>28548335
Sounds like a plan

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hxjXYzhRNJI&autoplay=1

OH GOD IS TRILBY'S PIANO ABOUT A PEDOPHILE?

>>28547965
my favorite
http://askpinkaminadianepie.tumblr.com/
>>28548151
In the story her only defining feature is that she's small, she doesn't really have a description, but since this pic was done everyone has drawn her this way, steel coat with rust mane

>>28548310
>>28548330
Nobody knows about the Crazy World of Arthur Brown anymore.

>>28548351
>mfw i had faceless filtered for my first two weeks here because of scat rp

Now you just kind of tune him out, like the background noise when you go to sleep...

here's a question for the writefags
http://fim.413chan.net/fic/res/6710.html#7474

>>28548383
Okay, I gotcha.

>>28548343
me gusta

>>28548065
I assume international shipping will be prohibitively expensive?

>>28548383
Ask Pinkamena is too popular, I can't enjoy it.

the rarity and twilight stories were shit. i will try fluttershy now

>>28548367
*Slurp, Smack~ shlrrp* "Mmmmnnhhh... so tasty... saliva mixing... nnnfh.." *shllp* "Y-you won't mind if I suckle at your tongue a bit...?" "*Mmph* *Hahn*..."

>>28548470
>Fluttershy
Good luck with that my freind.

GEORGE CARLIN TALKS ABOUT LOVE AND TOLERANCE

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IgbXtlrGdLs#t=1h25m9s

I AM NOT KIDDING

>>28548065
I'm interested
how much are we talking here, price-wise

or should i just email you for this kind of thing

>>28548468
Ponies is too popular.

You can't enjoy it.

>>28548470
>fluttershy

Ohhhhhhhhhhh I wouldn't read that one if you like Fluttershy.

>>28548470

Yea, i was so exited with twi but meh and im not even reading the one with rarity.

only hipsters like ponies these days

>>28548504
It's true, I hate nothing more that the massive amounts of Popularity /b/ gave this show.

>>28548494
>mfw

>>28548369
what a fucking shitty ytp
i want that 30 seconds back, fuckass

So who do I put in the balloon?

>>28548536
Well at least I've finally got an excuse to wear that fedora I've always liked.

Are there official plushies of the ponies If so, are they good at all?

>>28548513
Oh goodie, now I wanna read it.

>>28548459
I'm guessing it would be. Not sure, haven't shipped overseas yet.

>>28548501
yeah, email me.

>>28548564
All the Jews.

>>28548564
Rarity and Spike.

>>28548564

The characters hasbro use in the first place or caramel and cloudkicker.

>>28548536
But... I can't be a... I...

>>28548564
George Clooney and Frank Sinatra

as ponies

>>28548564
Background ponies that aren't on the poster?

>>28548564
Caramel. Poor bastard needs a break

He's watching. Watching how happy Rarity is with her friends...But soon that will change. Because he's so lonely

>>28548564
Fluffy Butts' aaaaaaand how about Cloudkicker?

>>28548564
Nyx

JK. Put Rose and OPPP in it.

>>28548572
It's pretty decent if I do say so myself.

>>28548401
I used to also. Now he's cool.

>>28548565
Don't have to be hipster to wear fedora's which are the second greatest thing invented since the battle axe.

wow the fluttershy story was bad. 3 pages of story and only 2 sentences of sex.

Am I the only one here who only likes MLP ironically?

>>28548623
I change my voicing to Berry Punch (OPPP) instead of Cloudkicker.
>>28548624