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!Taxif57b8c 07/28/11(Thu)02:37 No.28132450Aw, PM left.
Was just gonna say I liked the fic, as I often due, but I felt that it left too much to the imagination. Subtlety is good, but having some kind of definition for the context of the story (not overtly, just in parts) might make it more digestible.
I feel like your stuff is often really short as well - considering how talented your writing is, I'd like to see you include more on any given idea.
Other than that, not much else to say, you're leaps and bounds above what I'm doing, so keep up the good work, and good luck with EqD! |