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!Taxif57b8c 07/26/11(Tue)04:01 No.28069523>Re: Applejack fic
Holy shit well written, enough to make me want to give up on trying any more...
The dialogue especially was great, and the description...
the only things I had problems with were some of the transitions, and the abrubtness that some of the subject matter was introduced with, most of which I can't fault it for. Some of the scenes felt a little awkward as a result, however.
Bravo, 5 stars would read again etc. |