So, how long until "Theres a Pony for that" becomes an overused meme?

Geocentric solar system.

Powered by COSMIC MAGIC.

>>27835864
And fuckin miracles.

SHE ROTATES THE UNIVERSE

just to raise the sun on one planet

Celestia:

Shot of Tequila
Passion Fruit and Pinapple Juice
Hot Sauce

best tasting vag in ponyland.

She moves the sun.

In the ponyverse, the sun and moon rotate equestria

>>27835863
Riiiiiiiiiiiiight Abooooooooouuuuuuuuuuttttttttt... now

>>27835874
That sounds kind of ... bold.

How would you spend your days in the dungeon after being imprisoned for being an unimaginable eldritch horror, anon?

Would Celestia allow technology to progress to the point that the ponies of Equestria would fly into space?

So, Rarity is Sweetie Belle's mother...

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>>27831966

>>27831966

>>27831966

>>27835840
Lens-shaped planet. Sun and moon are approx. the same size, the sun slightly larger and slightly further away. The backside of the lens is meteor-scarred because it's a generation ship

>>27835874
Her vag tastes like Hepatitis C, with a dash of gonorrheaI

>>27835911
Its delicious, I made one tonight.

>>27835924
what? no, that's a meta thread. report it.

>>27835874
No Tequila. God damn, man. That shit sucks ass!

Just make her vag kind of fruity and pleasant; that's a good juicy snack.

>>27835874
>hot sauce

Eh, I'll pass.

She does nothing.
The planet rotates and orbits the sun by its very nature as a planet.
Celestia merely takes the credit, and the ponies are dumb enough to believe her.

so hey I posted on here a couple days getting some opinions on a Nightlight fic
and the first chapter is done
right here
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1wLUAh222-V5BTLZNCO-CDBeDpEENrC-3Ofqrc6gFfcA

it's the first chapter so there really isn't any shipping at all
looking for criticism if you have any

>>27835840
Celestia only makes the sun rise,

I'm pretty sure she controls the planets movements (probably some of the milokevich cycles)

Luna is in charge of the moon (obviously)

thats why celestia's always on earth and why the other creatures still respect her.

What about the other countries of the world

If they are all subject to Celestia's schedules why isn't the whole world under pony rule

>>27835871
MiRaClEs YoU sAy?

Do pony fags invade /co/?

or does /co/ just invade pony fags?

Invading the entire internet seem like it would be easier OH WAI-

>ponychan.net/chan/

>>27835917

Why are people so fucked up?

>>27835917
>>27835917
>>27835917
Sweetie Belle, NOOOOOO

>>27835917
post 2t par

>>27835957
>Nightlight

Oh boy time to read a fic about the rarest ship of all time.

Any more thoughts on my latest story before I go to sleep?

>>27835917
Why drown cute little sweetie belle?

>>27836002
>>27836005

Don't worry guys, she makes it out ok.

>>27836022
needs more oral and ropes.

>>27836015
There is no 2nd part yet.

>>27836001
>Do pony fags invade /co/?
Nope. MLP Generals are sanctified on /co/. or, at least, one at a time. (feel free to sagespam the others)
>ponychan
NOPE NOPE NOPE HUGBOX CIRCLEJERK TRIPFAG UTOPIA MODWORSHIPPING BULLSHITTERS FORCED HIVEMIND NOOOOOPE.

>>27835966
I'd wager it's because the ponies don't want to rule the world.

But I doubt any other nation tries to mess with Equestria. Celestia could bake them into a wasteland if she so chose.

>>27836033

Yes there is.

Sweetie made it out, and fucks up Rarity's scheme.

>>27836005
Fear not, child!

>>27836033

Toldja bitch

>>27836055


ALL THE DUBS

>>27836022

How about digging up the town time capsule?

Or Twilight uncovers a mirror that allows the gang to look into a universe of your choosing?

>>27836042
What if each country controls a different aspect of nature?

gryphons = wind
dragons = fire
sea ponies (which will appear in second season) = water
etc.

>>27835874
>See this
>Read ingredients
>Going to party in a week, want to experiment with different mixes
>Could be coo-
>best tasting vag in ponyland.
>best tasting vag in ponyland.
>best tasting vag in ponyland.

>>27835840
The 'sun' which Celestia manipulates is actually a series of mirrors in space which reflects the suns rays towards Equestria

Only Luna truly has the power to move a celestial object

So, it would seem that Equestria is dominated by a majority of females. This being the case and, assuming that most of the mares aren't bisexual, if you were to somehow enter this world as a male, you'd be in high demand... sexually.

If a pony were to come on to you, would you sate one of their sexual appetites with a pity fuck? Be honest, now.

I want a Rainbow Dash Weather app...

I suspect that Celestia and Luna are anthropomorphic manifestations of the actual celestial bodies. Celestia IS the sun, Luna IS the moon. And they are both insanely powerful and they can pretty much do as they please.

>>27836072
Gavalanche draws sweetie so cute. but the comics so grim

>>27836087
>pityfuck
>ponies
excuse me what?

>>27836001
/co/ is the pony and the pony is /co/.

http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
GET IN HERE YOU FAGS.

To whom the individual was who requested for Dash rubbing Scootaloo's wings sensually, are you perchance here tonight?

If so, would you like me to upload what I've got now? Or after I redraw it?

>>27836087
Wouldn't be a pity fuck.

I'd make my own harem and spread my seed amongst all ponies.

>>27836055

Is 3 through 5 out yet?

>>27836111
WE HAVE TO GO DEEPER

(must find Ponyception logo...)

>This thread

Jesus fuck, and it was so nice same time last night.

>>27836108
No such thing as a pity fuck with ponies.

>>27836087
> sate ONE
> ONE
I'd sate them all.

I'd sate them until I ran out of bodily fluids.

I'd sate them until I could barely stand, and then I'd sate them sitting on the bed, then lying on the bed, then sating Lyra's strange obsession with tupping a sloppy-seconds penis while it's still hard but half-soft on her hot wet thick tongue.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0wAgWGfskp0


Suggestions on what to do better next time?

how does this look?

>>27836111
This isn't the same rug I had in my /co/

>>27836070
I said thoughts on my LATEST story, not ideas for my next one. those can wait until tomorrow.

>>27836154
batman?

>>27836149
>this post

Well, fuck this shit. I'm out for the night.

Good luck dealing with these fuckers.

>>27836075
This works out rather well. Maybe all the species broke the world, and this is how they deal with it.

Or it could be like weather control in some other stories, where they have to calm down magic F5 tornadoes that throw Meteor everywhere.

>>27836154
This is what I think it is isn't it.

>>27836001
Hello again.

>>27835966
Because the other nations probably have their own god that controls their own aspects.

The dolphin god controlling the seas.

The Dragon god controlling fire and being responsible for all fires or some bullshit.

The Bull god controlling the earth and being responsible for earthquakes.

the moose god controlling maple trees.

Hey guys, I finally got my webcam working

Request a picture for me to try and I will butcher your idea

>>27836144
I just mean
christ
why would you PITY FUCK ponies that wants you sexually?
they're not landlubbers for crying out loud, they've got sentiency. ba dum tish

>>27836087
Who says males are in short supply? We've seen plenty of background colts. They're just not as important in the story because, as people tend to forget, this show is aimed at girls.

>>27836193
Shove a crayola (or any other pen-object) up your nostril the entire way. take pictures.

>>27836154

Affirmative

>>27836183

Dear god you didn't take it seriously did you?

/r/ all the different mixed drinks based on ponies

>>27836193
dogdogdogdogdogdogdogdogdog

>>27836122
>Cannot establish connection to Synchtube
>Disable Firewall
>Still not working

I hate you Synchtube

>>27836225
Of course not

>>27836171

Meant to say affirmative to this post

>>27836234
refresh

>>27836226
> Chistery's blood, then.

>>27835840

The way the sun behaved in the pilot, and in Sonic Rainboom leads me to believe that whatever the Equestrian sun is, its not in fact a star around which the planet orbits. It moves through the sky at strange rates and with peculiar pathing, and in sonic Rainboom, Rarity apparently got close enough to whatever the heck it is to melt her wings off, Icarus style.

I think there is something very fishy going on in the skies of Equestria and its got everything to do with those two immortals.

>>27836215
I meant to draw, but okay

>>27836055

Still fucked up.

>>27836250
So...

If you eat chistery's candy vag...

Do you get a buzz?

>>27836226

here ya go

>>27836270
Specifying can save your life.

>>27836270
>areyoufuckingserious.jpg

Do you think Luna developed some "different" fetishes while trapped on the moon for all those years?

>>27836161
It's cute I like it.

>>27836270

I laughed.

>>27836285
... Probably.

That'd be the most wonderful body shot ever - lapping up a wonderful wet hot cunt, and getting repaid in DRUNK.

>>27836225
>dashfangirlsquee.png
i thought you did smashingly
loved your playthrough btw
enough of me being a fanboy though
one thing the post said fascinating not fantastic

>>27836312
nah, I don't think cartoon ponies have fetishes actually

>>27836305
yes

Are you faggots trying to make this thread bad or is it just happening?

>>27836322
Sounds absolutely wonderful.

>>27836337
IT KEEPS HAPPENING

>>27835840
Neither one. She's a scam artist who pretends to move the sun but really just does some hoof-waving motions at the right time of day.

Ponies are really gullible and she uses this to her advantage to maintain unchallenged supremacy over the land.

>>27836337
Meh, I'm drunk. So I'm fucking around.

Lately I've been eating more oats and vegetables because it makes me feel like a pony.

>>27836344
You realize that particular ride is still under construction, right?

>>27836323

Damn you're right, oh well.

Kind of depressing that a 30 minute playthrough of a 10 minute flash game only got 300 views compared to a 10 second video that got 1,400 views

COMEDY

:V

>>27836352
I TOLD YOU /CO/

I TOLD YOU ABOUT PONIES

>>27836286
OH JOY, MY SHOPPING LIST!

>>27836360
This is some of the cutest fanart I've ever had. Thank you thank you thank you!

>>27836368

>>27835966

Because Equestria is a planar kingdom, a nation plane, one of many, ruled by an Immortal that defines and protects it. In Equestria's case, two immortals. When you leave Equestria, you also leave the sphere of influence of its rulers, and arrive in a neighboring planar kingdom, with an entirely different set of rules and occupants.

In short, Equestria is soft of like a pony Ravenloft.

>>27836359
What a lovely example of a non-sexual attempt to get into Pony Thread Simulator v3.0

If chistery replies to this, I pour another drin k.

>>27836170
Thoughts on the Pinkie's Dad dying story? It was pretty good, given its premises. It was direct and sad.

What would I do differently?

When I used Inky Pie in a story, I used a completely different fake name than Pinkamena. Sorta like how Donald Duck's nephews are Huey, Dewey and Louie, which are each short for names that don't rhyme. I suggest doing that.

It's rather abrupt, more of a scene than a story. There's really no character development, just character revelation. I would have preferred her love for her father being more important to her than their disagreement, and pushing through it to find a way to be there for him.

Also, what kind of Equestrian doesn't accept his daughter's cutie mark? Family tradition can't trump a sign of destiny pasted on both sides of her rump. Besides, the first Pie had to have been a pie-maker's son, or something like that.

So basically, I react to this story the same way as that story about Dinky being taken away by Foal Services - I like the story as written, but I don't think the premise fits the world well enough.

>>27836368

need fics of drunk ponies now please

Apparently there is another meta thread going on right now.
This meta thread stuff will probably go on forever wont it?

>>27836386
Stop posting pictures of your ugly mug.

>>27836336
What is that game?

>>27836391

>>27836391
The amount of assdamage they seem to suffer from us knows no bounds.
So no, they will last forever.

>>27836337
>>27836352
Yeah happens all the time, enjoy talking about how cool drinking is, time to go watch some streams of movies!

>>27836270

Can you draw Spike as the Armed Dragon LVL7 ( Yugioh)

>>27836254
Don't forget, weather occurs about a hundred feet up.

>>27836384

Or like Xanth..

>>27836286
Still waiting for a graany smith beverage...

>>27836386
who are you mister?

>>27836389
There's one on EqD that I can't be arsed to fi-
Fuck it.

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-what-do-you-do-with-drunken.html

>>27836428
OH GOD MY SANITY

>>27836427
Care to elaborate? It rings a bell, but I can't quite grasp it.

>>27836389
And day a pony got drunk.
That pony then fucked up at her job.
And Equestria was scorched as the suns flames licked at the land with fervor.

>>27836404
Dragon Quest VI for Super Famicom
>>27836399
nah

>>27835957

I am so okay with this pairing

>>27836435
Don't you fucking start.

>>27836193
Damn juice you look old as hell.

>Fat fucks are camwhoring

>>27836435
Go away Swollen Ball
I am not Faceless

>>27836436
brilliant
>>27836445
foty

>>27836455
He aged prematurely from posting art.

>>27836455
That's not Juice. Juice has brown, small fingers. This guy is white and has giant ham hands.

>>27836446
Bastard can't just get the DS remake. OH NO! He has to have a SFC cartridge.

>bitchesdontknowaboutmahsegachannel.png

>>27836254
Perhaps Equestria is on a steppenwolf planet. A planet that is freely flying through space. near no sun. it could even bee in deep space. And celestia is just a being that can create the sun in order to help move it around the planet to help harbor life (otherwise the only life the planet could support without a heat source would be at the bottom of the frozen oceans.) possibly one that was genetically engineered or produced to keep this planet alive as it traveled through the void.

What do you think the dictionary in Equestria would be called?

>>27836055
Yeah, I'm just going to pretend that second part didn't happen.
The facial expressions in these panels crack me up

>>27836455
fuck you don't insult Juice like that
he is my hasubando

>>27836391
A while back I made an Anti-Pony General static image from Action Hank punching a pony. Someone else obligingly created the same image, but as an animated gif.

I should go post it there.

>>27836483
He looks like a 'Ron' to me
I'm gonna call him Ron.

>>27836462
uh

>>27836483
You sure have been paying close attention to Juice's fingers, anon.

>>27835957
When twilight realized what she was wearing and just how fucked she is I had the weirdest boner

God, i derped hard in this one.
I don't really like the result, maybe re-doing it tomorrow.

I bet Equestria just has a normal day and night cycle, but the princess is like "I move the sun and the moon with magic," and nopony knows enough about science to tell her that she's full of shit.

>>27836491
>Raritys face in the second panel

REGRET?

>>27836512
I was in the thread wherein the 'omg breed the slavegirl Twilight!' thing happened.

Is this really a kink? Forced impregnation, that sort of thing?

>>27836492

So....are you taking drawing request or are you posting pictures of yourself ?

>>27836537
Now this I can get behind.

>>27836492
Former doppleganger here. You look less and less like me with every pic. I am OK with this.

>>27836489

That could also work, Equestria being a rogue planet on its way... somewhere. Though Celestia's palace has clear representations of other planets in its system. I suppose it could be a system that its no longer part of, but their existence is worth noting.

>>27836543
derp I forgot the pic

>>27836537
And the only one that's interested in science (Twilight) is wrapped around Celestia's hoof-finger and takes anything she says at face value.

All that's left to explain is the immortality.

>>27836337
Are you trying to suck all these dicks or is it just happening?

>>27836556
its the internet chistery
its SOMEONES kink

>>27836564
>>>/b/

>>27836489
SON OF A BITCH.

I was just about to post that theory.

Except with this ugly shit image. Fuck.

>>27836449
>Those piercings
>That magic suppressant
>Those filly bow-tie bindings
>the way the see-through fabric curves "just so" around her ass
>that collar

SO MANY EMOTIONS.

>>27836449
I totally stole crappyunicorn's Twilight slave dress design too

it is just too damn amazing

>>27836561
GUESS THE PONY FAGGOT. WHO IS?

YOU GUESS. ALSO DECIDE.

>>27836387
Jokes on ya'll. Poured another anyway.

I'm ok most of the time, but alchohol turns me into my true form. An asshole.

If faceless is out there, I want THOSE pics. You know the one.

Also requesting ponies in panties.

>>27836596
Who's this douchebag and/or upstanding gentleman

>Camwhoring

Nah, I'll just leave.

>>27836518
where did you mess up?

anyway, looks alright, ill save it anyways

>>27836387
Sure. What are you pouring?

>>27836596
Megasweet

>>27836623
>Applejack
We didn't want you here anyway.

>>27836621
More attractive than you are. I say this as a gayfag.

>>27836636
Nothing fancy. Jack and coke. But I have this nice big glass so I can do half and half with no ice and fit a whole can of coke.

I've had like 5 so far, feeling pretty good. You're my favorite tripfag and stuff.

>>27836489
>>27836586
Equestria is now a steppenwolf planet.

Make it Canon.

>>27836556
Yes, actually. There is nothing sexier IMO than making children.

I lost my button that killed everyone in this thread

Don't move or I'll shoot, see.

Stop this camwhoring nonesense at once, see.

>>27835917
>>27836055
>>27836546

I was meaning the second set of panels where Sweetie Belle comes back. I kind of prefer her dead.

On the other hand, those faces in the second set of panels are the best, so I guess Sweetie Belle gets to live. FOR NOW.

>>27836558
Sorry it turns out I cant actually draw

>>27836682
grab a drink, enjoy the party!

>pinkie pie hooves up dot jay pee gee

>>27836562
In that case it could be a fleet of multiple generationships, they're far enough that the other planets. perhaps the furthest ones away also have their own miniature star reactors but they're far enough that in the night sky they look like a single star. Other unmanned planets could just be extra stores of reserves and materials sent along either in orbit or under thrust/prupulsion that drives the original on.

perhaps the other generationships are in specific formation and thats why they're in their own constellation patterns, and those patterns stay constant while background stars change. and thats their significance.

>>27836686
Okay.

>>27836512
I can't say that was intentional, but it sure is a helluva good result!

>>27836686

LOOK OUT!

HES GOT A GUN!

>>27836489
>Perhaps Equestria is on a steppenwolf planet.
>Equestria is on a steppenwolf planet.
>a steppenwolf planet.
>Steppenwolf

I LIKE TO DREAM
YES YES
RIGHT BETWEEN THE SOUND MACHINE
ON A CLOUD OF SOUND I DRIFT INTO THE NIGHT; ANY PLACE IT GOES IS RIGHT
GOES FAR, FLIES NEAR, TO THE STARS AWAY FROM HERE

>>27836646
All of my boners lost for all of his drawings forever.

>this thread
I fucking hate you people.

>>27836730
>allowing my posts to ruin your pony experience
grow thicker skins guys

>>27836730
>help help, I'm repressing myself

>>27836681
So you like bareback. You like driving it in and out and feeling her warm and soft and trembling, clasping around you as she grows closer to orgasm.

That little throaty half-drowned squeak in her throat just before she whispers, "Come inside me."

The liquid heat pouring from your cock as you finally pound away, her hot kisses on your face and nails in your back as she screams, "YES! YES! BREED ME!"

>>27836729
Y'really think that guy's ugly? I'd give him a pass.

> You're now aware Megasweet looks like a bad stretch of road.

>>27836748
I don't think that word means what you think it does.

>>27835957

Okay, now for feedback:

I think the start was a little too long and felt a little contrived. We didn't need this much set up for the premise of the fic. Tell us that NMM won in a paragraph, and get us to the good stuff sooner =P

Afterwards, the writing feels wonky, but somehow works. The kinds of mstiakes I see a lot of amateur writers make, you make- except they so fit the situation that they're not really mistakes.

I love the filly celestia/Sunny. Great reversal =P

I see that we've seen the same pic that inspired the fic. It's awesome!

The fic ends right as we get to the good part! I need moar!

>>27836661
I wouldnt stick my dick in it

>>27836750

I never want to color another shipping pic again so please leave those at the door when requesting.

>reading a fanfic
>updating thread every two minutes
>read for half an hour
>realize I haven't gotten 1/4 of the way through the fic

Darnit, I can't lurk and read. Seeya.

>>27836774
>nails

Wait. What.

>>27836750
Yeah, just like that.

Just like that.

>>27836785
snips and snails in a 77 dodge challenger souped up to be a cop car

>>27836730

Why, we figured out Celestias importance
>>27836668

She controls the most vital system on a rogue planet. as they travel through space.

Its why the ponies also have to control the weather. Because the irregular distribution of light from the sun reactor weather patterns aren't quite nominal. So to accomidate this the ponies modify the weather to best suit their needs.

>>27836790
Tell us what fic it is before you go.

So who moved the sun and the moon before Celestia and Luna?

Did they have parents that, after eons came and went, passed away, bestowing their powers upon their children to keep the world balanced?

Or were the sisters always a part of Equestria's planet, possibly even creating it after leaving who or whatever made them?

>>27836785
Thank you very much
I will take note for any future picture requests
I am happy with how good it turned out

>>27836730

I can't take this /co/ shit anymore.

Waiting for season 2 is more of a hell than for any Valve game.

>>27836591

I know, right?

I think this might be my favorite BDSM pic ever. Just the tiny details, and the understatedness of it all.... it works amazingly.

Is Braeburn a faggot, or is he just effeminate? He seems like a leather daddy faggot.

http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
Ponies?
Robots?
Youtube Poop?
Oh my!

>>27836820
The sisters were made by the parents to keep a planet safe as it travelled through the void of space.

Bassically the sisters moved out and are now on a road trip across space.

Their parents are back taking care of their home solar system or perhaps even galaxy (maybe universe)

see
>>27836668
>>27836586
>>27836489

>>27836827
hes a faggot im my head canon

>>27836827
>effeminate
>Maybe 15 min of screen ti-

Just... fuck this.

>>27836827
he is metro.

Sorry guys

>>27836726
You are now hearing this in your head.

Manually.

>>27836766
aw but I loved writing the first part so much
also I saw it as kindu'v necessary to explain why Nightmare did everything that she did before the rainbow

if she actually wanted to stop Twilight in the beginning she could have
I feel it's important to know that

but I could probably trim it down a bit
there was an awful lot of monologue in it


and yeah completely amateur writer over here
anything particular I should avoid or change that didn't somehow fit?

>>27836823
STOP STARING AT ME

>look through archived threads for slave twilight discussion

>no luck so far

=(

>>27836875
it takes like 30 seconds to tell if someone is a faggot or not

5 seconds if they like the Village People

i was just walking home and i saw a fluttershy in the grass. the head plug is broken and there are cuts in the ass and leg. i was walking past a park so it must have belonged to a little kid.

>>27836875
Ill see you there

we can yell at Earth together, then blow it up

>>27836914
>The most powerful unicorn to have ever existed
>Save to anything or anyone
>=(
NOPE

>go to market
>get apple
>pony: "you took the last apple..."
>share apple

such is life in the Ville.

>>27836914
It's an old thread.

I couldn't find it even if i wanted too.

>>27836907
No

>>27836926
SAVE THAT FLUTTERSHY

GIVE HER THE HOME SHE DESERVES.

>>27836926
call me crazy, but I'm not touching any MLP toy I see lying on the ground, especially after reading these threads

it's like touching a needle on the ground, you just don't do it

>>27836803

This leaves one major question though.

The other planets we see in Celestia's iconography. Do they represent the system the planet left, or the system the planet is going to...

>>27835917

Rarity is Sweetie Belle's sister...

who would win in a pony/human war?

>>27836983
Dangit, now I'm imagining a bruised and beaten Fluttershy. She's wimpering in the corner, hiding under a leftover blanket you had. She sniffling and coughing every once in a while. And all you can do is leave her a bowl of milk and the lights on.

>>27836949

She may be the most powerful unicorn, but the Alicorns are yet stronger. Much.

>>27837029
depends, do we have prep time?

>>27837033
>Shes terrified if you.
>The only reason you caught her was because she fainted when you got near her.

>>27837046
Of course we do. Ponies don't start wars.

>>27837021
I'd imagine the system that it's left. It looks like it could be a visual history for the goddess.

>>27837033

>>27837000
i am about to boil it in water. that should fix the hair also which is a huge mess.

>>27837021
The poor planet system they are going to infest next.
Ponies are like the Zerg.
Except instead of creep you have fucked up pony controlled weather and seasons.

>>27837072
It's what I've given my dog when they get scared because of fireworks. Plus, it's something that helps me sleep.

>>27836890

>>27837056
then we win go in there guns a blazin

>>27837033
put her in a cage, let her lie in her shit and piss, maybe hose her down once and a while when the maggots start to move in

hell, she can even eat a handful to save money on food

fuck her raw dog, give her a good stomp to the head if she even makes a sound, breed that pussy good

>>27837021
Maybe both. perhaps different tapestries different things.

I mean the top part looks like coridinates or systems.

(two of the planets are blue with lines pointing at them (stars?, planets that can support life? the bigger one the home star, the furthest the destination) what about the moon like object?

then below that, there's what looks like an alien craft surround by a light source (equestria is like an alien craft, and it's surrounded by a light)

and finally you see celestia and her star. on the planet

>>27837104
>Read as leave her inmilk

HOW HIGH AM I.

>>27837033
>>27837051
I can't believe I want a fic of this

>>27837033
Baww

>>27835957
>>27836449

I feel guilty that those pics gave me a mild boner.

>>27837144
Sounds cute but

>Human/pony fic

OH SWEET BABY JESUS NO.

>have fluttershy completely at your mercy
>don't rape her

Whats wrong with you people

>>27837144
Dangit, I'm sorry for causing this.

How about we sidetrack onto how Fluttershy got into this world in the first place? Or what you would get her to help calm her down?

>>27837124
Dude.

No.
Yes.

NO.

>>27837178
we aren't from /b/

>>27837178
>Raping animals

Quit masturbating to horses, bro.

>>27837178
Fuck if I know

>>27837178
Oddly enough, I think she'd be comfortable with sex

she sees it so often among the animals, she doesn't even think twice

>>27837201

I don't masturbate to horses.

I masturbate to personalities.

>>27837067
>>27837021
Well either they've gotten visited by aliens or Equestrians took over earth.

>>27837090
Man if humanity could get help to control the weather to make earth into a paradise it'd be great, we'd accept pony colonist if they pulled their weight...

if they tried to take over we'd slaughter them.

but they're cute enough that we'd agree to cohabitation.

I just hope they don't hate us for killing some creatures... (alot of creatures) and i hope they understand the concept of pest (they don't like parasprites)

but at least they'd care for the creatures in any environments they changed due to weather.

Think about it, ponies could save so many lives from severe storms.

And they could benefit from our technology.

An alliance is best.

>this thread
>camwhoring
>people talking to each other that has nothing to do with ponies
>stupid trolol garbage
>absolutely no fart porn to be found
okay fuck this thread. I'm leaving MLP general forever, I mean it. Good bye.

Seriously guys...Guys seriously stop just stop

>>27836896

Alright, 'll be getting pretty nitpicky here, but it's really because I like your writing- you've got a great sense of timing, and I think with practice and more attentin to detail, you could be a great writer.

In the second paragraph, we get, "Ok maybe proud is the wrong word," The "Ok" takes the reader out of the moment. It's more of a stream-of-consciousness sort of writing that wouldn't be jarring if it were clear before that that we were seeing directly into NMM's mind. I think it reads a lot better as "Perhaps proud was the wrong word." The rest of the paragraph falls prey to similar problems, switching between a straight narrative and NMM's consciousness without reason or warning.

>>27837243

Overall, I think this is the most consistent flaw in your writing: the context for the words changes arbitrarily, and the point of view change is often obscured for the reader. Am I reading NMM's thoughts? An impartial observer's description? An omniscent writer's thoughts? It's never quite clear, and more importantly, the tone never settles into one of those alternatives, leading the reader confused.

I think this from further on in the story illustrates it quite well, "She moved outside of the now slightly windy fading rainbow, better safe than sorry she mused as she reformed just behind the now unconscious group of ponies." It's just jarring t go from description to monologue in the same sentence without so much as punctuation to mark the change. It reads better as, "She moved outside of the now slightly windy fading rainbow, figuring it was better to be safe than sorry, as she reformed just behind the now unconscious group of ponies." On an unrelated note, this sentence tends toward run-on-ness, which is another flaw that crops up a few times. Even better would be, "She moved outside of the now slightly windy fading rainbow, figuring it was better to be safe than sorry. She reformed just behind the now unconscious group of ponies.

Most of the problems are technical issues of this nature, ones that are easily enough solved with practice and education. I really enjoyed reading this, and I think your writing has a lot of potential. As I said, I think you've got a great sense of timing. I particularly like this line:

"So Twilight Sparkle, after reviewing her circumstances and weighing her options, which were nonexistent, decided to panic. "

Coming off of the previous description of panic,with a timely paragraph break, really made that line shine.

Looking forward to part 2!

>>27837236
>thinks he can leave

>>27837213
>Fluttershy hurt/comfort fic

Uh that's okay, maybe, not really, it's cute I guess.

>DUDE WHAT IF WE RAPED A SICK HORSE

welp.

>>27837236
STAY WITH US DR. WHITE! SHIIIIIT DON'T LEAVE!

>>27837228
A pony/human alliance would benefit both sides pretty well. Though ponies seem to have everything they need pretty well in hand.

We would benefit a ton if we somehow were able to replicate how they use magic via our technology.

how does this look­?

>>27837221
Its a representation of their craft. Equestria is the alien ship. its traveling through space. the ponies will never reach their destination in their life time, but the ship is luna's and celestias, not the ponies.

the wild parts of the land are the native fauna of their home planet, so that they can settle any planet they reach.

>>27835840
Heh, when in Rome

>>27837273
>Green tech + Magic


Awww yeah

>>27837277
Twilight's head looks a bit off

>>27837273
maybe we could convince them to teach us how to make our own reactor so we could turn ceres into earths own galactic exploration ship. and ride the cosmic oceans.

What's that term when girls shave their pubes but leave that little vertical line above their pussies? A landing strip? Is that it? Is there something else?

>>27837279
So Celestia, and possibly other Allicorns, fly around space, find inhabitable planets, settle down and slowly take over the planet as a whole?

>>27837323
Hopefully it comes with FTL travel, or we won't be going anywhere very fast.

>>27837277
I don't understand your style..
It looks like you can do so much better, but you choose to stay with this weird oddly shaped cartoony look.

>>27837266
First, we lull Fluttershy into a false sense of security by being nice to her, then we drug the hot tomato soup just enough that she's still conscience but slightly daze, and so that the shock of being raped doesn't kill her.

Then we make the Anthro babbies.

>>27837341
Yeah, landing strip.

Hey guyz I have an alternate theory

Bonus: the destination leads to a planet of primitives ruled by an immortal claiming to be the sun god

>>27836087
IT BEGINS

>>27837346
>FTL
>Breaks the laws of physics
>Magic
>Breaks the laws of physics

Obviously it'll be FTL

>>27837353
If I could do better I would believe me

>>27837360
SG-1 would have an interesting time going to THAT planet.

>>27837277
i hate twilight do more pinkie

>>27837356
THAT WAS RHETORICAL ANON

I made a thread

I went to post the link in the last thread and got banned for, 'shitting up a'

The thread I made is still there, and I can't delete it now

>>27837346
yeah they travel the stars bringing live to each planet.

though with only two sisters i wonder how they're expecting to make any more alicorn gods to go on their own travels, (unless they hope they'll run into a male, or maybe they can reproduce a-sexually or they just build another some how)

and they just bring pony life to all planets. in that respect some sort of hybrid generation ship/van neumann probe.

>>27837400

What would be worse, a fic of fluttershy being beaten and she lives, or a fic of fluttershy being beaten and dieing?

>>27837408
>i wonder how they're expecting to make any more alicorn gods to go on their own travels

Promotion?

>>27837413
The former.

>>27837413
well that depends on the quality of the writing on each one

>>27837413
I have a fic about a monster ripping apart fluttershit and most of the others. You wanna read it

>>27837413
Being beaten, then found later, nursed back to health, and then raped.

>>27837408
And the point of building a pony civilization is to get to a level of civilization to where the ponies can build another ship to go inhabit a new world.

Will the Goddess(es) eventually leave their planets to it's own devices? Or will they send off their children with this new ship?

>>27837440

Sounds like a potential cluster fuck. Do they all die at the same time or is it all in sequence?

>>27837413
You're giving us an option. It seems we have improved you. However, there is still much for you to learn.

First off, to answer your question, she is beaten and lives.

BUT, this is what happened before. Your story must be about meeting her and helping her. You must do your best to have her squeak out her suffering, while choosing to appreciate your efforts and not blame all of humanity.

This is your task. Do you accept the challenge?

>>27837243
>>27837258
thankyou thankyou
this is exactly what I was looking for

I'm going to go another day of reviewing it and seeing if I can't find more changes to make
definitely taking what you said to heart and I'll work on the clarify when it's a narative and when and which of the characters are thinking
thanks again

>>27837413
Definitely being beaten to within an inch of her life, then at the last possible moment we keep her alive.

Like, if we saw Fluttershy's legs off to the elbow/knee and she's forced to crawl around like a gimp horse while shes pregnant.

That would be the worst thing possible and i feel sick for typing it.

>>27837461
in sequence

>>27837470
I'd say whyboner.jpg.

But I know why.

And I approve.

>>27837400
>>27837434
>>27837440
>>27837443
>>27837470
>>27837488

HURRY SEASON TWO

>>27837498
Hate to break it to you Anonymous...

>>27837466

>improved

I don't think I've gotten any legitimate criticism from anyone other than Pacce. Most of the time people just say whether or not they liked it.

>meeting her and helping her

Whoa now, I don't want to write human/pony shit. If anything, I'd have some other pony look after her.

>>27837519
>Season 2 will start
>fandom will collapse due to crappy quality of show
>we all go back to our normal lives

>>27837519
Blue Lanterns 4 Life motherfuckers.

>>27837431
anymore pictures of twilight as a princess?

>>27837445
The alicorns are sisters. Obviously the children are the ones who continue one, Celestia will take over the next solar system she comes across, luna might go out on her own (maybe using the moon) or perhaps she'll stay with celestia.

but their children will be the ones that explore further.

such is the nature of alicorn life.

>>27835957
>>27836031
>>27836087
>>27836126
>>27836131
>>27836149
>>27836449
>>27836512
>>27836556
>>27836591
>>27836681
>>27836696
>>27836729
>>27836750
>>27836826
>>27837124
>>27837169
>>27837213
>>27837216

>>27837543
Blue is the best Lantern corps.

>>27837560
Do they bring some ponies with them when they seed a world? Or are they somehow able to generate a starting group from scratch during the initial colonization process?

>>27837584
instaboner.jpeg.tiff.quex

>>27837604
We don't see that many ponies, so I'd say they only have a few to seed. A Noah's ark type thing.

>>27837498
It's ok!
I'm here now and I've brought cute ponies!

>>27837584
That right front leg looks really off. Like it's bending from the shoulder completely wrong.

>>27837563
Nah, i'm going to keep going.

>>27837604
>Blue is the best Lantern corps
>not Orange
Leth I'm disappointed.

>>27837584
YOU FAGGOTS HAVE GONE TOO FAR THIS TIME

Where are the main cast's parents?

>>27837654

THEIR PARENTS ARE DEAAAAAAAAD.

Except Twilight's, I'm pretty sure they're still alive.

>>27837660
>he's fucking her THOUGH the guillotine blade

I don't even.

>>27837469

Sweet.

Can I ask you a favor? I don't check these threads every day, but I'd love to see how this progresses, and I'd be sorry if I missed out on it because I skipped a few threads. If you do publish a part 2/3/etc., would you mind e-mailing me the finished product? I promise to give more feedback =)

gorgias3808@yahoo.com

>>27837642
>greed

No way. Hope's much better.

>>27837660
that is my fetish.
a very specific fetish, I'll admit

>>27837660
Heh heh...
Oh Bronies.

>>27837676
Celestia had Twilight's parents executed

>>27837660
I was looking forward to that, actually. To bad it's such a poor shoop.

>>27837680
The blade has been removed. He's deepthroating her to the extreme.

>>27837676
They are alive, yes, but they are addicted to plant food.

>>27837708
The shooper just used the bloodied blade for her severed neck. There should be two holes, a spinal column, and all kinds of tendons and shit, and properly dark red blood.

>>27837676
THIS THREAD IS DEAD

>>27837470
>>27837498
I'm really worried about us...how much longer do we have to go?

Hey guys, Lostkause/ Low key is streaming

http://www.livestream.com/itsponytime

It's Twilight / Celestia tribadism so be warned

>>27837169
You should see the actual porn the artist's done

http://fim.413chan.net/art/src/131051777358-25com_ambia_copy.png

>>27837779

Just ignore the retards, and post crazy pony theories or something

>>27837779

You're just begging me to write something.

>>27837779
Were gonna ride this train of insanity as far as we got too!
Rails? FUCK RAILS WE HAVE BEEN FREE FALLING THE LAST 3 MONTHS!
Sounds dangerous when we land?
Well FUCK YOU, who is the engineer?!
THAT'S RIGHT...I don't know either, he umped off when the season ended.

>>27837794

Amazing.

Who's the artist?

>>27837802
Theory: Twilight Sparkle is a living cosmic leyline. Once mastered, her magical prowess will be unparalleled. She will one day rule, through brute force and an iron hoof.

And Equestria will be better for it.

>>27837813
Do it man, live up to your namesake.

Destroy Fluttershy WITH EMOTIONS.

>>27837519
>>27837532
>Season 1
>Hasbro allows quite a bit of creative freedom
>Solid production team
>Solid voice acting
>Well known producer with a vision for the show
>Best writers aren't even Faust
>Huge fringe demographic: SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY

>Season 2
>Faust isn't the same type of producer therefore:

>Hasbro decides to meddle with the show, make it like previous generations
>Voice actors leave
>Production shipped off to North Korea/Mexico/Detroit
>All the writers jump ship

>Implying everyone hates money

hey guize is this still the general?

i liek ponies

Guys here's this old thread for later

>>27835754
>>27835754
>>27835754
>>27835754

>>27837604
the ponies are like their attendants.

They will populate any worlds.

when they reach a new world some ponies will build space ships and colonize the new planet.

if the resources on the travel planet are nearly depleted the ponies might all do an exodus, but this usually isn't the case. ponies are pretty sustainable. The ponies always follow along with their gods. ever since the ponies were created, their short life times might seem cruel, but it is only because the light that burns twice as bright last half as long.

>>27837832
Iram AKA CrappyUnicorn.

Possibly the best artist we've got in terms of quality x quantity (some artists are better but less prolific and vice versa).

Fuck me

Started sorting my Pony Folder

I figure I'm like maybe 1/10th done and its taking for fucking ever

Why am I doing this again?

Also just doing the file-renames first, haven't even started folders.

>>27837832
Iram the crappy unicorn

>>27837794
>That ominous NMM shadow in the doorway

Fucking hell that picture is tripping on way too many of my fetishes.

>>27837845

Well there will be some verbal abuse, but sadly she won't be raped. I refuse to write that shit.

There won't be a human involved either, so who would take her in?

>>27837905
zecora

>>27837905
Spike.

>>27837905
Zecora.

>>27837912

NOPE, not doin anymore rhyming for a while. Holy shit that was annoying to write after a while.

>>27837905
The black one.

>>27837279

It is a Space Hulk, and its path leads it right towards Holy Terra.

>>27837905
Not judging but I find it fascinating how many pony fans have these very strict and particular divisions between what they do and do not find acceptable.

>>27837869

Awesome. Do you know where I can find his r34 stuff? All I can find from most google searches is clean

>>27837935
You lazy bastard.

Fine, big mac. Because that ship sucks.

>>27837949
FOR THE EMPRESS

>>27837935
What about Luna?

>>27837935
FINE. Gilda comes back and takes her in. Or something.

http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
JESUS WONT SHUT UP ABOUT LINKING THIS
COME SUCK HIS E-PENIS

>>27837986
but Gilda is such a loser :(

>>27837956
Paheal or FA. You have to sign up for the latter.

Ponibooru possibly, but while Paheal is a shit sandwich they're at least completionists. Ponibooru just plain doesn't have everything.

>>27837905
Twilight I can see her insisting she help her and Fluttershy trying to refuse not wanting to be a bother

http://www.synchtube.com/r/commanderjesus
Hi thread here's a thing.

>>27837956
>His
Her.
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/iram/

>>27838000
That's the point

>>27837956

She has a thread on fimchan with a lot of it

>>27837952

I don't do shipping or anything has to do with ponies fucking. I'm just not good at writing that stuff.

>>27837986
This one sounds good.

Gildashy doesn't get any love.

>>27838022
rod a goes into slot b

i'm writing erotica

Thread simulator stuff right here, so I'll spoiler since spoiler text didn't actually make it in

Probably gonna be weird, but I feel weird and I'm completely serious

I've started coloring pictures and while I'm brushing, stroking, breathing life into them with color, my heart goes aflutter and I have to take pause

I have taken this pause to tell you this, but I actually tire of wasting time. Does anyone else feel this way while draw, write, or color?

RS I know what happens to you so don't even

>>27838051
you sick fuck

>>27838051
The trick to writing good fap material is to embellish the language just the right amount without going overboard.

>>27838051
Spoiler that shit.

>>27838077
Um...

I sometimes get a boner when I draw 34.

But it's not like...a health risk.

>>27838077
That's how many normal artists feel about creating artwork in general, anon.

Not thread simulator material in the least.

>>27838077
I didn't understand it myself until i tried it, I love getting art boners.

>>27837972

That's just dandy right there!

>>27838127
Really?

Am I doing it wrong?

Because that has never, ever happened.

>>27838164
You haven't found passion in your artwork then.

Or you just think more technically rather than emotionally when you make art.

>>27838077
>not drawing with your own semen
>2011

it works like invisible ink

>>27838186
I defs boner'd when i was writing rarity clopfic, and I don't even like Rarity

The idea of putting all the things that make you excited, and other people too, in to words for consumption by other people, is pretty hawt.

>>27838043
sweet vengeance

Well I think I'm gonna write this with Mac, I've got an idea of what I want to do.

>>27838186
I get pretty lost in the moment and lose track of time and all that shit.

But I have never had hearth palpitations while doing art. I don't think any of my colleagues have either.

>someone finally drew Story of the Blanks 34
>sort of