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!tedl177Zx2 02/10/11(Thu)19:28 No.23363709 File1297384099.png-(27 KB, 119x135, Pinkie grin.png)
>>23362865 Late reply here. Your art is good (speaking as a writer and haven't drawn anything in sometime), and I like the concept, but I just have a little personal taste suggestion
Balloons! No wait, less balloons. STREAMERS! WHOOOOSE request is it?
Okay, seriously. I like the idea of ponies going to way, but you seem to enjoy turning the ponies into something a bit masculine and muscly and warlike.
Thematically, and visually, I like the idea of heightening the cute of the ponies. It makes it all that much more strange when you pair up something so cute as a pony to something so stark as Vietnam. The contrasts hint at irony and humor while still being visually appealing
Anyways, that's my personal take on it. Feel free to make it 20% cooler. |